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@@ -362,10 +362,10 @@ available Android devices ship with some proprietary software.)
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             <li>
-              Comes installed with a free OS, and its Wi-Fi and 3D-accelerated graphics work with any other <a href="http://www.gnu.org/distros/">fully free GNU/Linux distribution</a>.
+              Comes installed with a free OS, and its Wi-Fi and 3D-accelerated graphics work with any other <a href="https://www.gnu.org/distros/free-distros.html">fully free GNU/Linux distribution</a>.
             </li>
 
-            <li> While its proprietary boot firmware means it's <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/free-bios.html">not fully free</a>, this laptop is one of the most freedom-supporting available. Browse more companies that sell <a href="www.gnu.org/links/companies">free software-compatible computers</a>.</li>
+            <li> While its proprietary boot firmware means it's <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/free-bios.html">not fully free</a>, this laptop is one of the most freedom-supporting available. Browse more companies that sell <a href="https://www.gnu.org/links/companies">free software-compatible computers</a>.</li>
             <li><span style="font-weight:bold">SAVE!</span> $5 off any purchase of $50 or more with coupon code FSFGIVING. ThinkPenguin will also donate $5 to the FSF (expires at the end of 2014).</li>          
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@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ available Android devices ship with some proprietary software.)
               Soon-to-be federated to allow decentralized sharing.
             </li>
 
-            <li>Supports free video formats. And ability to choose a <a href="https://www.gnu.org/copyleft/">copyleft license</a>.</li>
+            <li>Supports free video formats and grants the ability to choose a <a href="https://www.gnu.org/copyleft/">copyleft license</a>.</li>
 
             <li>Source files can be attached to an upload, making it easy to remix people's work.</li>
 
@@ -773,13 +773,13 @@ available Android devices ship with some proprietary software.)
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           <p>The FSF is a charity with a worldwide mission to advance software freedom —
-            <a href="https://static.fsf.org/about">learn about our history and work.</a>
+            <a href="https://fsf.org/about">learn about our history and work.</a>
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+                               <a href="https://fsf.org/about/contact.html" title="Find out how to contact us">
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