Phrasing update: "own your data" -> "free your data from proprietary control"

diff --git a/docs/source/mediagoblin.rst b/docs/source/mediagoblin.rst
index c437ecc3fcd4b25d3d296a48f2001fd984ba4edd..af6658f3f4d6262d78a116f7286009273a60248f 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/source/mediagoblin.rst
+++ b/docs/source/mediagoblin.rst
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@ Why are we doing this?
 Centralization and proprietization of media on the internet is a
 serious problem and makes the web go from a system of extreme
 resilience to a system of frightening fragility.  We believe people
-should be able to own their data and that means someone has to build
-the tools to make it possible.  We decided that in this case, that
-someone would be us!
+should be able to free their data from proprietary control and that
+means someone has to build the tools to make it possible.  We decided
+that in this case, that someone would be us!
  
 
 Who are you?