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                                                <h3>Work for political change</h3>
                                                <p>Encrypting our email is a powerful direct action, but to change the system, we also have to go to the root. One of the key things needed is <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/surveillance-vs-democracy.html">reducing the amount of data collected about us in the first place</a>.</p><p>To learn more and participate in efforts for change, join the <a href="https://www.fsf.org/free-software-supporter/subscribe">Free Software Foundation's mailing list.</a></p>
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                                                <h3>Make these tools even better</h3>
-                                               <p>Like programming? Contribute code to <a href="https://www.gnupg.org/">GnuPG</a> or <a href="https://www.enigmail.net/home/index.php">Enigmail</a>. Have an idea for improving this guide? Leave us <a href="https://libreplanet.org/wiki/GPG_guide/Public_Review">feedback</a>.</p>
+<p><a href="https://libreplanet.org/wiki/GPG_guide/Public_Review">Leave feedback and suggest improvements to this guide.</a>, or email us at <a href="mailto:campaigns@fsf.org">campaigns@fsf.org</a> if you'd like to help maintain or translate it.</li> 
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+                                               <p>If you like programming, you can contribute code to <a href="https://www.gnupg.org/">GnuPG</a> or <a href="https://www.enigmail.net/home/index.php">Enigmail</a>. Have an idea for improving this guide? Leave us <a href="https://libreplanet.org/wiki/GPG_guide/Public_Review">feedback</a>.</p>
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+<p?<a href="https://u.fsf.org/7w">If you can't do any of these, you can always donate to the Free Software Foundation so we can get it into the hands of as many people as possible.</a></p>
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                                                <h3>Protect more of your digital life</h3>
-                                               <p>Learn surveillance-resistant technologies for instant messages, hard drive storage, online sharing and more at <a href="https://directory.fsf.org/wiki/Collection:PRISM"> the Free Software Directory's PRISM Collection</a> and <a href="prism-break.org">prism-break.org</a>.</p>
+                                               <p>Learn surveillance-resistant technologies for instant messages, hard drive storage, online sharing and more at <a href="https://directory.fsf.org/wiki/Collection:Privacy_pack"> the Free Software Directory's Privacy Pack</a> and <a href="prism-break.org">prism-break.org</a>.</p>
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                                                <h3>Learn more about GnuPG</h3>
                                                <p>There are a lot more features of GnuPG to discover, including encrypting files on your computer. There are a variety of resources accessible via Google, but we recommend starting with the links on the <a href="https://www.gnupg.org/documentation/">GnuPG Web site</a>.</p>
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-                                               <h3>Contribute to this guide</h3>
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-                                                       <li><a href="https://libreplanet.org/wiki/GPG_guide/Public_Review">Leave feedback and suggest improvements</a></li>
-                                                       <li>Email us at <a href="mailto:campaigns@fsf.org">campaigns@fsf.org</a> if you'd like to help maintain and improve this guide, or to translate it</li>
-                                                       <li><a href="https://u.fsf.org/7w">Donate to the Free Software Foundation</a></li>
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                                                <h2><em>#6</em> Next steps</h2>
+<p>You've now completed the basics of email encryption with GnuPG, taking action against bulk surveillance. A pat on the back to you! Want to do more to secure privacy for yourself and the people you communicate with?</p>
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                                                <h2><em>#6</em> Next steps</h2>
+<p>You've now completed the basics of email encryption with GnuPG, taking action against bulk surveillance. A pat on the back to you! Want to do more to secure privacy for yourself and the people you communicate with?</p>
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