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@@@ -151,20 -188,22 +188,23 @@@ Install MediaGoblin and Virtualen
     branch of the git repository. Eventually production deployments will
     want to transition to running from more consistent releases.
  
- Issue the following commands, to create and change the working
- directory. Modify these commands to reflect your own environment::
+ We will now clone the MediaGoblin source code repository and setup and
+ configure the necessary services. Modify these commands to
+ suit your own environment. As a reminder, you should enter these
+ commands using your unpriviledged system account.
  
-     mkdir -p /srv/mediagoblin.example.org/
-     cd /srv/mediagoblin.example.org/
+ Change to the MediaGoblin directory that you just created::
+ 
+     cd /srv/mediagoblin.example.org
  
 -Clone the MediaGoblin repository::
 +Clone the MediaGoblin repository and set up the git submodules::
  
      git clone git://gitorious.org/mediagoblin/mediagoblin.git
 +    cd mediagoblin
 +    git submodule init && git submodule update
  
- And set up the in-package virtualenv::
+ Set up the in-package virtualenv::
  
 -    cd mediagoblin
      (virtualenv --system-site-packages . || virtualenv .) && ./bin/python setup.py develop
  
  .. note::