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                                <h1>Email Self-Defense</h1>
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-                                       <p>The goal of this guide is to make it easy to set up email encryption on your computer. Once you've finished the guide, you'll be able to send and receive emails that are coded to make sure that a surveillance agent or thief can't intercept your email and read it. </p>
-                                       <p>This isn't something you'd do with every email, or even every day. Rather, it's a tool to have handy when you need to send something sensitive.</p>
-                                       <p>You'll also be able to sign emails to show reliably that they are from you. Though the need for signing may be less obvious, you'll actually do it more often.</p>
-                                       <p>All you need is a computer with GNU/Linux or Windows and an Internet connection. You can use your existing email account for this without affecting it.</p> 
+                                       <p>The goal of this guide is to make it easy to set up email encryption on your computer. Once you've finished, you'll be able to send and receive emails that are coded to make sure that a surveillance agent or thief can't intercept your email and read it. </p>
+                                       <!--<p>You'll also be able to sign emails to show reliably that they are from you. Though the need for signing may be less obvious, you'll actually do it more often.</p>-->
+                                       <p>All you need is a computer with an Internet connection, and email account and about half an hour. You can use your existing email account for this without affecting it.</p>
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+<p>This guide relies on software which is freely licensed; it's completely transparent and anyone can copy it or make their own version. This makes it safer from surveillance than proprietary software (like Windows). Learn more about free software at <a href="https://u.fsf.org/ys">fsf.org</a>.</p>
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                                                <p>Coming soon</p>
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+<p>This guide relies on software which is freely licensed; it's completely transparent and anyone can copy it or make their own version. This makes it safer from surveillance than proprietary software (like Mac OS). To be as safe as possible from surveillance, we recommend you switch to a free software operating system like GNU/Linux. Learn more about free software at <a href="https://u.fsf.org/ys">fsf.org</a>.</p>
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+                                               <h3>Switch to GNU/Linux for maximum safety</h3>
+                                               <p>Mac OS is a nonfree operating system, which means that no one but Apple gets to see the code it runs on. This makes running Mac OS risky for your privacy -- there's no way to know if it's spying on you.</p><p>To push back hard against surveillance, we recommend you switch to a free software operating system like GNU/Linux. Free operating systems are completely transparent, so anyone can find and remove dangerous code. Learn more about free software at <a href="https://u.fsf.org/ys">fsf.org</a>.</p>
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+<p>This guide relies on software which is freely licensed; it's completely transparent and anyone can copy it or make their own version. This makes it safer from surveillance than proprietary software (like Windows). To be as safe as possible from surveillance, we recommend you switch to a free software operating system like GNU/Linux. Learn more about free software at <a href="https://u.fsf.org/ys">fsf.org</a>.</p>
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+                                               <h3>Switch to GNU/Linux for maximum safety</h3>
+                                               <p>Windows is a nonfree operating system, which means that no one but Microsoft gets to see the code it runs on. This makes running Windows risky for your privacy -- there's no way to know if it's spying on you.</p> <p>To push back hard against surveillance, we recommend you switch to a free software operating system like GNU/Linux. Free operating systems are completely transparent, so anyone can find and remove dangerous code. Learn more about free software at <a href="https://u.fsf.org/ys">fsf.org</a>.</p>
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