en: apply fixes by Besnik and Tom (Typo Re: Substantial update...)

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@@ -467,8 +467,8 @@ page</a>.</dd>
 
 <dl>
 <dt>More about keyservers</dt>
-<dd>You can find some more keyserver information<a
-href="https://www.gnupg.org/gph/en/manual/x457.html"> in this manual</a>. <a
+<dd>You can find some more keyserver information <a
+href="https://www.gnupg.org/gph/en/manual/x457.html">in this manual</a>. <a
 href="https://keys.mailvelope.com">The Mailvelope Key Server</a>
 allows automatic public key lookup. You can also <a
 href="https://www.gnupg.org/gph/en/manual/x56.html#AEN64">directly export
@@ -673,7 +673,7 @@ href="mailto:edward-en@fsf.org">edward-en@fsf.org</a>. Make the subject
 <dd>You could get the above error message, or something along these lines:  "Unable to send this message with end-to-end encryption, because there are problems with the keys of the following recipients: ..." In these cases, you may be trying to send an encrypted email to someone when you do not have their public key yet. Make sure you follow the steps above to import the key to your key manager. Open the OpenPGP Key Manager to make sure the recipient is listed there.</dd>
 
 <dt>Unable to send message</dt>
-<dd>You could get the following message when trying to send your encrypted email: "Unable to send this message with end-to-end encryption, because there are problems with the keys of the following recipients: edward-en@fsf.org." This usually means you imported the key with the "unaccepted (unverified) option." Go to the "key properties" of this key by right clicking on the key in the OpenPGP Key Manager, and select the option <i>Yes, but I have not verified that this is the correct key</i> in the "Acceptance" option at the bottom of this window. Resend the email.</dd>
+<dd>You could get the following message when trying to send your encrypted email: "Unable to send this message with end-to-end encryption, because there are problems with the keys of the following recipients: edward-en@fsf.org." This usually means you imported the key with the "Not accepted (undecided)" option. Go to the "key properties" of this key by right clicking on the key in the OpenPGP Key Manager, and select the option <i>Yes, but I have not verified that this is the correct key</i> in the "Acceptance" option at the bottom of this window. Resend the email.</dd>
 
 <dt>I can't find Edward's key</dt>
 <dd>Close the pop-ups that have appeared since you clicked Send. Make sure
@@ -862,7 +862,7 @@ alt="Section 5: trusting a key" /></p>
 
 <p>In your email program's menu, go to OpenPGP Key Manager and select <i>Key properties</i> by right clicking on Edward's key.</p>
 
-<p>Under "Your Acceptance," you can select <i>Yes, I've verified in person this key has the correct fingerprint"</i>.</p>
+<p>Under "Your Acceptance," you can select <i>Yes, I've verified in person this key has the correct fingerprint</i>.</p>
 
 <p class="notes">You've just effectively said "I trust that Edward's public
 key actually belongs to Edward." This doesn't mean much because Edward isn't
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ invalid keys might be readable by surveillance programs.</p>
 
 <p>In your email program, go back to the first encrypted email that Edward
 sent you. Because Edward encrypted it with your public key, it will have a
-green checkmark a at the top "OpenPGP" button.</p>
+green checkmark at the top "OpenPGP" button.</p>
 
 <p><strong>When using GnuPG, make a habit of glancing at that button. The program
 will warn you there if you get an email signed with a key that can't

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@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ we don't use Facebook</a>.</small></p>
 
 <form method="post"
 action="https://my.fsf.org/civicrm/profile/create?reset=1&amp;gid=391">
-<input type="text" value="Type your email..." name="email-Primary"
+<input type="text" placeholder="Type your email..." name="email-Primary"
 id="frmEmail" />
 <input type="submit" value="Add me" name="_qf_Edit_next" />
 <input type="hidden"