small doc update

diff --git a/README b/README
index 745858606c226bf23bae0c692890c2d92e365517..aa8236a1a52b6fd9152ce3c5baccd6cb66a3bd39 100644 (file)
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -8,12 +8,12 @@ errexit: exit and print stack trace
 the err* functions depend on bash-trace.
 
 
-For scripts which don't or hardly contains functions, this is usually sufficient:
+For scripts without any nested function calls, this is usually sufficient:
 set -eE -o pipefail
 trap 'echo "$0:$LINENO:error: \"$BASH_COMMAND\" returned $?" >&2' ERR
 
 
 Related: see my bash script template repo.
 
-Patches, bugs, and any feedback is very welcome via email to
-Ian Kelling <ian@iankelling.org>.
+Please email me if you have a patches, bugs, feedback, or republish this
+somewhere else: Ian Kelling <ian@iankelling.org>.