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                                                <h3>Work for political change</h3>
-                                               <p>Encrypting our email is a powerful direct action, but to change the system, we also have to go to the root. One of the key things needed is <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/surveillance-vs-democracy.html">reducing the amount of data collected about us in the first place</a>. To learn more and participate in efforts for change, join the Free Software Foundation's low-traffic mailing list (<a href="https://my.fsf.org/donate/privacypolicy.html">read our privacy policy</a>) and follow us on microblogging services.</a></p>
+                                               <p>Encrypting our email is a powerful direct action, but to change the system, we also have to go to the root. To learn more and participate in efforts for change, join the Free Software Foundation's low-traffic mailing list (<a href="https://my.fsf.org/donate/privacypolicy.html">read our privacy policy</a>)</a></p>
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+<p>Join us on microblogging services for day-to-day updates:</p>
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-<p><small>(<a href="https://www.fsf.org/twitter">Read why we don't recommend Twitter</a>)</small></p>
+<p><a href="https://www.fsf.org/twitter">Read why GNU Social and Pump.io are better than Twitter.</a></small></p>
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-                                               <h3>Go to a keysigning party</h3>
-                                               <p>Keysigning parties are social events designed to build the Web of Trust. Participants match each others' photo IDs and key fingerprints, and then get out their laptops and sign each other's public keys. They're a great way to meet likeminded people and learn about new privacy tools, as well as build up people's trust in your key. Look for keysignings at tech events, hackerspaces and nerdy parties.</p>
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                                                <h3>Make Email Self-Defense tools even better</h3>
-<p><a href="https://libreplanet.org/wiki/GPG_guide/Public_Review">Leave feedback and suggest improvements to this guide</a>, or email us at <a href="mailto:campaigns@fsf.org">campaigns@fsf.org</a> if you'd like to help maintain or translate it.</p>
+<p><a href="https://libreplanet.org/wiki/GPG_guide/Public_Review">Leave feedback and suggest improvements to this guide</a>. We welcome translations, but we ask that you contact us at <a href="mailto:campaigns@fsf.org">campaigns@fsf.org</a> before you start, so that we can connect you with other translators working in your language.</p>
 
                                                <p>If you like programming, you can contribute code to <a href="https://www.gnupg.org/">GnuPG</a> or <a href="https://www.enigmail.net/home/index.php">Enigmail</a>.</p>
 
-<p>If you can't do any of these, please support the Free Software Foundation so we can get Email Self-Defense into the hands of as many people as possible, and make more tools like it.</a><p><a href="https://crm.fsf.org/civicrm/contribute/transact?reset=1&id=14&pk_campaign=esd&pk_kwd=guide_donate"><img alt="Donate" src="//static.fsf.org/nosvn/enc-dev0/img/donate.en.png"></a>      <a href="https://u.fsf.org/yr"><img alt="Join now" src="//static.fsf.org/nosvn/enc-dev0/img/join.en.png"></a></p>
+<p>To go the extra mile, support the Free Software Foundation so we can promote Email Self-Defense as heavily as possible, and make more tools like it.</a><p><a href="https://crm.fsf.org/civicrm/contribute/transact?reset=1&id=14&pk_campaign=esd&pk_kwd=guide_donate"><img alt="Donate" src="//static.fsf.org/nosvn/enc-dev0/img/donate.en.png"></a>      <a href="https://u.fsf.org/yr"><img alt="Join now" src="//static.fsf.org/nosvn/enc-dev0/img/join.en.png"></a></p>
 
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