updated the LP14 header.

[libreplanet-static.git] / 2014 / call_for_sessions / confirmation.html

diff --git a/2014/call_for_sessions/confirmation.html b/2014/call_for_sessions/confirmation.html
index 02e1969ec50e4f0f49a17c512db78ddcf4ce46e0..e50a18196d88ccb34709af3a8cb127953311fc87 100644 (file)
--- a/2014/call_for_sessions/confirmation.html
+++ b/2014/call_for_sessions/confirmation.html
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
                          <div class="lp-head">
                                <h1><a href="/server/staging/lpc14"> LibrePlanet <small>2014</small></a></h1>
                                <p><strong>March 2014 in Cambridge, MA</strong></p>
-                               <p class="text-muted">The yearly conference of the free software community</p>
+                               <p class="text-muted">A yearly conference for the free software community.</p>
                          </div>
                        </div><!-- end of lp header -->
                        <div class="col-sm-5"> <!-- start of signup form -->
@@ -63,12 +63,12 @@
                                                <input id="custom_79_yes"
                                                           name="custom_79[yes]" type="checkbox" value="1" checked="checked"
                                                           class="checkbox" />
-                                               Also join the FSF's newsletter
+                                               Also subscribe to the FSF's newsletter and updates.
                                          </label>
                                          &middot;
-                                         <p class="help-block">Read our
+                                         <p class="help-block">
                                                <a href="https://my.fsf.org/donate/privacypolicy.html">
-                                                 privacy policy</a>.</p>
+                                                 Privacy policy</p>
                                        </div>
                                  </div>
                                </div>