From 557939210b0223fed62545003f2e05c22e2ef77a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Molly de Blanc <molly@fsf.org>
Date: Tue, 21 Nov 2017 17:17:01 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 1/1] copy edits.

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 v8/givingguide.html | 27 +++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/v8/givingguide.html b/v8/givingguide.html
index cdc031f..c27d74a 100644
--- a/v8/givingguide.html
+++ b/v8/givingguide.html
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@
                 iOS is a fully proprietary operating system, giving Apple control over the software on the devices.
               </li>
               <li>
-                Apple uses <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">DRM</a> to block competing software.
+                Apple uses <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">Digital Restrictions Management (DRM)</a> to block competing software.
               </li>
             </ul>
           </div>
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@
                 </p>
 		    <a href="https://store.vikings.net/x200-ryf-certfied" class="seller action-button">Vikings</a>
                 <p class="sale-info links">
-                  Viking's X200 is <a href="https://www.fsf.org/ryf">Respects Your Freedom</a> certified. Global shipping is available. <a href="#viking-promotion">Sale details.</a>
+                  Vikings's X200 is <a href="https://www.fsf.org/ryf">Respects Your Freedom</a> certified. Global shipping is available. <a href="#viking-promotion">Sale details.</a>
 
                 </p>
             
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@
                 </p>
                 <a href="https://store.vikings.net/libre-friendly-hardware/vikings-d16-workstation" class="seller action-button">Vikings</a>
                 <p class="sale-info links">
-		 The D16 Workstation is not Respects Your Freedoms certified at this point. <a href="#vikings-promotion">Sale details.</a>
+		 The D16 Workstation is not Respects Your Freedom certified at this point. <a href="#vikings-promotion">Sale details.</a>
                 </p>
               </div>
             </div>
@@ -528,7 +528,7 @@
                 </p>
                 <a href="https://store.vikings.net/libre-friendly-hardware/vikings-d16-workstation" class="seller action-button">Vikings</a>
                 <p class="sale-info links">
-		  The Workstation is not Respects Your Freedoms certified at this point.
+		  The Workstation is not Respects Your Freedom certified at this point.
 		</p>
               </div>
             </noscript>
@@ -797,7 +797,7 @@
               <li>Performance and seamless interface <a href="https://www.tomsguide.com/us/lulzbot-mini-3d-printer,review-2744.html">earned it "Editor's Choice"</a> in <em>Tom's Guide</em>'s 2016 3D printer comparison.</li>
               <li>Hardware designs available to make customization easy. Standardized material format allows 3D printing with plastics, wood-, stone-, bamboo-, rubber-, and metal-like materials.</li>
             </ul>
-            <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Makerbot</h5>
+            <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: MakerBot</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
               <li>
                 MakerWare software is proprietary, restricting freedom and stifling innovation.
@@ -859,7 +859,7 @@
 	    <p>Gaming systems have adopted all sorts of DRM technologies, allowing gaming companies to limit your access to games and even the ability to brick whole systems. However, there's hope in the wide world of DRM-free games!</p>
 	      <li><a href="https://www.gog.com/">Good Old Games</a> thinks you should not just be able to play with your friends, but share with them. They carry all kinds of games -- action, adventure, RPGs, strategy game s-- and even movies specially for gamers.</li>
 	      <li><a href="https://www.humblebundle.com/">Humble Bundle</a> first made its name with pay-what-you-want DRM-free books, and have since expanded to a whole range of games.
-		<li>We'd be remiss to not mention <a href="http://www.nethack.org/">Nethack</a>, a game well loved by many gamers and free software nerds. A classic <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roguelike">roguelike</a> with a <a href="http://nethack.org/common/license.html">classic, freedom-respecting license</a>, there's no reason to not feel good sharing this game.</li>
+		<li>We'd be remiss to not mention <a href="http://www.nethack.org/">NetHack</a>, a game well loved by many gamers and free software nerds. A classic <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roguelike">roguelike</a> with a <a href="http://nethack.org/common/license.html">classic, freedom-respecting license</a>, there's no reason to not feel good sharing this game.</li>
 		</ul>
           </div>
           <!--End Good-->
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@
           <div class="good col-md-6 col-sm-6">
             <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Netflix</h5>
               <ul class="cons">
-		<p>Whether it's <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/blog/tell_netflix_nix_drm_original_productions">using major studios as scapegoats for using DRM</a> or <a href="https://www.w3.org/2017/09/pressrelease-eme-recommendation.html.en">pushing for DRM as an official W3C Recommendations</a>, Netflix has been at the front line of getting DRM into media online and in your home.</p>
+		<p>Whether it's <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/blog/tell_netflix_nix_drm_original_productions">using major studios as scapegoats for using DRM</a> or <a href="https://www.w3.org/2017/09/pressrelease-eme-recommendation.html.en">pushing for DRM as an official W3C Recommendation</a>, Netflix has been at the front line of getting DRM into media online and in your home.</p>
             </ul>
           </div>
           <!--End Bad-->
@@ -1002,7 +1002,7 @@
                     <li id="technoethical-promotion"><strong>Technoethical:</strong>
                       Receive a 5% discount on any items you buy from the Web site. Ends at 00:00 EST on February 1st, 2017. Use the coupon code <span class="label label-default">FSFHOLIDAYS</span> at checkout.</li> -->
                       <li id="lulzbot-promotion"><strong>LulzBot: </strong><a href="https://www.lulzbot.com/black-friday-cyber-monday-preview">Black Friday and Cyber Monday discounts</a> are available through their site.</li>
-		      <li id="thinkpenguin-promotion"><strong>ThinkPenguin:</strong> 5% discount on <b>all</b> products is available to <a href="https://fsf.org/join">FSF members</a> <span class="label label-default">fsfftw</span>.</li>
+		      <li id="thinkpenguin-promotion"><strong>ThinkPenguin:</strong> 5% discount on <b>all</b> products is available to <a href="https://fsf.org/join">FSF members</a>.</li>
                       <li id="vikings-promotion"><strong>Vikings:</strong> 5% discount on <b>all</b> products and services between now and February 1, 2018. <b>Help the FSF!</b> Vikings will also make a donation for each product purchased using this code. Use the coupon code  <span class="label label-default">fsfftw</span>.</li>
 
 </ul>
@@ -1017,14 +1017,14 @@
         </section>
         <!-- End Promotion details   -->
 
-	      <!-- Start Respects Your Freedoms -->
+	      <!-- Start Respects Your Freedom -->
       <section class="promotion-details">
         <div class="container">
           <div class="row">
             <div class="col-md-12">
               <div class="panel-default">
                 <div class="panel-heading">
-                  <h1 class="fix-margin">Respects Your Freedoms</h1>
+                  <h1 class="fix-margin">Respects Your Freedom</h1>
                 </div>
                 <div class="panel-body" id="promotion-details">
 		  <p>The FSF certifies hardware that <a href="https://www.fsf.org/resources/hw/endorsement/respects-your-freedom">respects your freedoms</a>. These items arrive installed with free software, and you can see a  <a href="https://www.fsf.org/resources/hw/endorsement/respects-your-freedom">complete list</a> of RYF products on FSF.org.</p>
@@ -1038,7 +1038,7 @@
           </div>
           <!-- End Container -->
         </section>
-        <!-- End Respects Your Freedoms   -->
+        <!-- End Respects Your Freedom   -->
 
         <!-- Begin Licenses -->
         <section class="licenses">
@@ -1058,8 +1058,7 @@
                       <li>X200, T400, iPhone, and ISP-provided router images are in the public domain.</li>
                       <li>LulzBot 3D printer photo by Aleph Objects is licensed under a <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/deed.en_US">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported.</a></li>
                       <li>ThinkPenguin with GNU and both ThinkPenguin router images by ThinkPenguin are licensed under a <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/deed.en_US">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported.</a></li>
-                      <li>Technoethical Replicant N2, Wi-Fi Dongle, and X200t by Technoethical 2016-2017 licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">CC BY-SA 4.0</a>.</li>
-                      <li>LibreTea computer with modular chassis image by Luke Kenneth Casson Leighton licensed under<a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">CC BY 4.0</a>.</li>   </ul>
+                      <li>Technoethical Replicant N2, Wi-Fi Dongle, and X200T by Technoethical 2016-2017 licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">CC BY-SA 4.0</a>.</li>
                   </div>
                 </div>
               </div>
@@ -1082,7 +1081,7 @@
                 <p>The FSF is a nonprofit with a worldwide mission to advance software freedom —
                   <a href="https://fsf.org/about">learn about our history and work.</a>
                 </p>
-                <p>Version 7.0. Copyright © 2004-2016
+                <p>Version 8.0. Copyright © 2004-2017
                   <a href="https://fsf.org/about/contact.html" title="Find out how to contact us">
                     Free Software Foundation
                   </a>, Inc.
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