From ff3d384e699d68102e32c890aca908f3dd7d0f99 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Zak Rogoff <zak@fsf.org>
Date: Wed, 25 Nov 2015 10:31:52 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Text tweaks, adding links.

---
 2015/givingguide.html | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2015/givingguide.html b/2015/givingguide.html
index 160aaa6..a824b1c 100755
--- a/2015/givingguide.html
+++ b/2015/givingguide.html
@@ -302,7 +302,7 @@
                         <h4 class="title">ThinkPenguin Router</h4>
                         <ul>
                             <li>
-                                Safely segregate privacy sensitive network traffic from internet traffic to further improve security.
+                                Easily separate privacy-sensitive network traffic from Internet traffic to improve security.
                             </li>
                             <li>
                                 As free as can be: runs the <a href="https://www.gnu.org/distros/free-distros.html">FSF-endorsed</a> LibreCMC operating system on hardware that is certified to <a href="https://www.fsf.org/ryf">Respect Your Freedom</a>.
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@
                                 Proprietary firmware means that there's no way for you to know whether it's spying on you -- and it handles all your Internet traffic as well as local print jobs and file transfers.
                             </li>
                             <li>
-                                Many models are subject to remote firmware updates from your cable provider, likely one of the same companies trying to lock down the Internet and break net neutrality.
+                                Many models are subject to remote firmware updates from your Internet Service Provider, which probably does not have your best interests in mind -- these same companies fight net neutrality.
                             </li>
                         </ul>
 
@@ -439,8 +439,8 @@
                             <h4 class="title">Photoshop and Illustrator</h4>
                             <ul>
                                 <li>Proprietary software controlled by Adobe.</li>
+                                <li>Shuts down when its DRM is unable to verify the costly required subscription, even if it's actually up to date.</li>
                                 <li>Prefers locked-down proprietary formats.</li>
-                                <li>Shuts down if its DRM is unable to verify the costly required subscription, even if it's actually up to date .</li>
                             </ul>
 
                         </div>
@@ -523,9 +523,9 @@
                     <div class="recommend_wrapper">
 
                         <div class="recommended_product">
-                            <img class="recommended_product_img" src="//static.fsf.org/nosvn/images/tehnoetic_adapter.png" alt="Tehnoetic Dongle Wi-Fi adapter" />
-                            <h4 class="title">Tehnoetic Dongle Wi-Fi Adapter</h4>
-                            <p>Great for all-free-software installations on laptops with incompatible Wi-Fi hardware. Discount code: FSFGIVING.</p>
+                            <img class="recommended_product_img" src="//static.fsf.org/nosvn/images/tehnoetic_adapter.png" alt="Tehnoetic Mini Wi-Fi adapter" />
+                            <h4 class="title">Tehnoetic Mini Wi-Fi Adapter</h4>
+                            <p>Great for all-free-software installations on laptops with incompatible Wi-Fi hardware.</p>
                             <div class="buy">
                                 <a href="https://tehnoetic.com/tehnoetic-wireless-adapter-gnu-linux-libre-tet-n150"><img src="//static.fsf.org/nosvn/images/givingguide/images/buy.png" alt="Buy" />
                                 </a>
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