From: Molly de Blanc
Date: Tue, 21 Nov 2017 22:17:01 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: copy edits.
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iOS is a fully proprietary operating system, giving Apple control over the software on the devices.
- Apple uses DRM to block competing software.
+ Apple uses Digital Restrictions Management (DRM) to block competing software.
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Vikings
- Viking's X200 is Respects Your Freedom certified. Global shipping is available. Sale details.
+ Vikings's X200 is Respects Your Freedom certified. Global shipping is available. Sale details.
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Vikings
- The D16 Workstation is not Respects Your Freedoms certified at this point. Sale details.
+ The D16 Workstation is not Respects Your Freedom certified at this point. Sale details.
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Vikings
- The Workstation is not Respects Your Freedoms certified at this point.
+ The Workstation is not Respects Your Freedom certified at this point.
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Performance and seamless interface earned it "Editor's Choice" in Tom's Guide's 2016 3D printer comparison.
Hardware designs available to make customization easy. Standardized material format allows 3D printing with plastics, wood-, stone-, bamboo-, rubber-, and metal-like materials.
- Stay away from: Makerbot
+ Stay away from: MakerBot
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MakerWare software is proprietary, restricting freedom and stifling innovation.
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Gaming systems have adopted all sorts of DRM technologies, allowing gaming companies to limit your access to games and even the ability to brick whole systems. However, there's hope in the wide world of DRM-free games!
- Good Old Games thinks you should not just be able to play with your friends, but share with them. They carry all kinds of games -- action, adventure, RPGs, strategy game s-- and even movies specially for gamers.
- Humble Bundle first made its name with pay-what-you-want DRM-free books, and have since expanded to a whole range of games.
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- We'd be remiss to not mention Nethack, a game well loved by many gamers and free software nerds. A classic roguelike with a classic, freedom-respecting license, there's no reason to not feel good sharing this game.
+ - We'd be remiss to not mention NetHack, a game well loved by many gamers and free software nerds. A classic roguelike with a classic, freedom-respecting license, there's no reason to not feel good sharing this game.
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Technoethical:
Receive a 5% discount on any items you buy from the Web site. Ends at 00:00 EST on February 1st, 2017. Use the coupon code FSFHOLIDAYS at checkout. -->
LulzBot: Black Friday and Cyber Monday discounts are available through their site.
- ThinkPenguin: 5% discount on all products is available to FSF members fsfftw.
+ ThinkPenguin: 5% discount on all products is available to FSF members.
Vikings: 5% discount on all products and services between now and February 1, 2018. Help the FSF! Vikings will also make a donation for each product purchased using this code. Use the coupon code fsfftw.
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