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 	      <li>Note: While the main processor is exclusively running free software, the modem processor runs a Samsung nonfree system.</li>
             </ul>
 
-            <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: iPhone X</h5>
+            <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: iPhone</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
               <li>Comes with no shortage of <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareIniThings">spyware</a>.</li>
               <li>
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@
               <li>
                 Apple uses <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">Digital Restrictions Management (DRM)</a> to block competing software.
               </li>
-	      <li>Also avoid: iPhone 8 Plus, iPhone 8</li>
+	      <li>Avoid: iPhone X, iPhone 8 Plus, iPhone 8, and other models.
             </ul>
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@@ -316,8 +316,7 @@
               </li>
               <!-- Commented out pending citation or confirmation <li>Includes Management Engine, a hardware-based backdoor that gives Intel a permanent backdoor into your computer.</li>-->
               <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
-	     <li>Avoid: Dell Inspiron Touch-Scree and HP Omen.</li>
-	     <li>Also avoid: MacBook Pro</li>
+	     <li>You can find Windows on computers like the Dell Inspiron Touch-Screen, HP Omen, and Lenovo Ideapad.</li>
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@@ -411,8 +410,7 @@
                  Apple app stores use <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">DRM</a> to restrict what you can do with your purchases.
               </li>
               <li>Comes crawling with <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareInMacOS">spyware</a>.</li>
-	      <li>Avoid: MacBook Air</li>
-	      <li>Also avoid: Asus Zenbook, Lenovo Ideapad</li>
+	      <li>Avoid: MacBook Air (and MacBook Pro)</li>
             </ul>
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@@ -486,7 +484,6 @@
                 data.
               </li>
  <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
- <li>Also avoid: Lenovo Yoga, iPad, Windows Ink</li>
             </ul>
           </div>
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