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               <li>
                 Apple uses <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">Digital Restrictions Management (DRM)</a> to block competing software.
               </li>
-	      <li>Also bad: iPhone 8 Plus, iPhone 8</li>
+	      <li>Avoid: iPhone 8 Plus, iPhone 8</li>
             </ul>
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               </li>
               <!-- Commented out pending citation or confirmation <li>Includes Management Engine, a hardware-based backdoor that gives Intel a permanent backdoor into your computer.</li>-->
               <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
-            </ul>
-	    <li>Also bad: Dell Inspiron Touch-Screen, HP Omen, and MacBook Pro</li>
+	     <li>Avoid: Dell Inspiron Touch-Screen, HP Omen, and MacBook Pro</li>
+	     </ul>
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                  Apple app stores use <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">DRM</a> to restrict what you can do with your purchases.
               </li>
               <li>Comes crawling with <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareInMacOS">spyware</a>.</li>
-	      <li>Also bad: MacBook Air, Asus Zenbook, Lenovo Ideapad</li>
+	      <li>Avoid: MacBook Air, Asus Zenbook, Lenovo Ideapad</li>
             </ul>
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@@ -484,7 +484,7 @@
                 data.
               </li>
  <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
- <li>Also bad: Lenovo Yoga, iPad, Windows Ink</li>
+ <li>Avoid: Lenovo Yoga, iPad, Windows Ink</li>
             </ul>
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 	      <p>Many consider music essential to the richness of the human experience. Thanks to the <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/guide/audio">many artists, producers, record labels, and shops</a> highlighted on <a href="https://defectivebydesign.org">Defective by Design</a>, the rights-respecting options are nearly endless. Check out music from great labels and artists, including:</p>
               <li><a href="http://www.dischord.com/">Dischord Records</a>, a classic punk label providing music since 1980.</li>
 	      <li><a href="https://folkways.si.edu/">Folkways</a>, courtesy of the Smithsonian Institute.</li>
-	      <li><a href="http://www.mergerecords.com/shop">Merge Records</a>, home to Grammy-winning and well-loved indie darlings.</li>
-	      <li><a href="http://www.nin.com/">Nine Inch Nails</a>, the industrial rock band fronted by Trent Reznor.</li>
-	      <li><a href="https://www.theymightbegiants.com/">They Might Be Giants</a>, delivering tunes to you since the 1980s.</li>
+	      <li><a href="https://www.emusic.com/">Emusic</a> is the Web's second largest music store.</li>
 	    </ul>
 
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