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@@ -841,7 +841,7 @@ it's the laptop that's most frequently used in the FSF office!
Stay away from: MacBook Air and MacBook Pro
- macOS is proprietary software that restricts its users' freedoms.
- - In early November 2020, macOS started alerting Apple each time a user opens an app. Even though Apple is making changes to the service, it just goes to show how bad they try to be until there is an outcry.
+ - In early November 2020, macOS was caught alerting Apple each time a user opens an app. Even though Apple is making changes to the service, it just goes to show how bad they try to be until there is an outcry.
- Apple has been opposing the Right to Repair home user devices for years, and maintains totalitarian control over their hardware.
- Comes crawling with spyware that rats on you to advertisers.