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               <li>
                 Apple uses <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">Digital Restrictions Management (DRM)</a> to block competing software.
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                 Apple uses <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">Digital Restrictions Management (DRM)</a> to block competing software.
               </li>

-             <li>Avoid: iPhone 8 Plus, iPhone 8</li>
+             <li>Also avoid: iPhone 8 Plus, iPhone 8</li>

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               </li>
               <!-- Commented out pending citation or confirmation <li>Includes Management Engine, a hardware-based backdoor that gives Intel a permanent backdoor into your computer.</li>-->
               <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
               </li>
               <!-- Commented out pending citation or confirmation <li>Includes Management Engine, a hardware-based backdoor that gives Intel a permanent backdoor into your computer.</li>-->
               <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>

-            <li>Avoid: Dell Inspiron Touch-Screen, HP Omen, and MacBook Pro</li>
+            <li>Avoid: Dell Inspiron Touch-Scree and HP Omen.</li>
+            <li>Also avoid: MacBook Pro</li>

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                  Apple app stores use <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">DRM</a> to restrict what you can do with your purchases.
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               <li>Comes crawling with <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareInMacOS">spyware</a>.</li>
                  Apple app stores use <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">DRM</a> to restrict what you can do with your purchases.
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               <li>Comes crawling with <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareInMacOS">spyware</a>.</li>

-             <li>Avoid: MacBook Air, Asus Zenbook, Lenovo Ideapad</li>
+             <li>Avoid: MacBook Air</li>
+             <li>Also avoid: Asus Zenbook, Lenovo Ideapad</li>

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                 data.
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  <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
                 data.
               </li>
  <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>

- <li>Avoid: Lenovo Yoga, iPad, Windows Ink</li>
+ <li>Also avoid: Lenovo Yoga, iPad, Windows Ink</li>

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