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             <h1>Give the gift of freedom!</h1>
 
            <p>A new phone or computer can be the highlight of the holidays, but with proprietary software lurking under the wrapping paper, your thoughtful gift may be more naughty than nice.</p>
-<p>This guide replaces these holiday humbugs with better devices from ethical companies&mdash;no <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">creepy remote deletion of files or  punitive and mean rules about copying and sharing</a>. Just products and software that respect the freedom and privacy of your loved ones: gifts you can feel good about.</p>
+<p>This guide replaces these holiday humbugs with better devices from ethical companies&mdash;no <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary" style="color: gold">creepy remote deletion of files or  punitive and mean rules about copying and sharing</a>. Just products and software that respect the freedom and privacy of your loved ones: gifts you can feel good about.</p>
 <p>Plus, our crib notes below will help you explain why this version is better than the one they've heard of (and spread the word about software freedom, too).</p>
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             <a class="action-button" href="https://www.fsf.org/givingguide/giving-guide-giveaway-primer">Host a Giveaway</a>
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-              Download the printable version.
+              Printable version coming soon!.
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              <li>Note: While the main processor is exclusively running free software, the modem processor runs a Samsung nonfree system.</li>
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-            <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: iPhone X</h5>
+            <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: iPhone</h5>
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               <li>Comes with no shortage of <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareIniThings">spyware</a>.</li>
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-                iOS is a fully proprietary operating system, giving Apple control over the software on the devices.
+                iOS is a fully <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary operating system</a>, giving Apple control over the software on the devices.
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                 Apple uses <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">Digital Restrictions Management (DRM)</a> to block competing software.
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-             <li>Also bad: iPhone 8 Plus, iPhone 8</li>
+             <li>Avoid: iPhone X, iPhone 8 Plus, iPhone 8, and other models.
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             <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Microsoft Windows</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
-             <li>Runs on proprietary software that profits from treating the user as a product&mdash;<a href="https://edri.org/microsofts-new-small-print-how-your-personal-data-abused/">each account is assigned an advertising ID</a> to help Microsoft sell user
+             <li>Runs on <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary software</a> that profits from treating the user as a product&mdash;<a href="https://edri.org/microsofts-new-small-print-how-your-personal-data-abused/">each account is assigned an advertising ID</a> to help Microsoft sell user
                 data.
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               <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
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-           <li>Also bad: Dell Inspiron Touch-Screen, HP Omen, and MacBook Pro</li>
+            <li>You can find Windows on computers like the Dell Inspiron Touch-Screen, HP Omen, and Lenovo Ideapad.</li>
+            </ul>
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               <li>Created by a small business that replaces all restrictive components from a stock laptop.</li>
           <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Apple</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
-              <li>Runs on proprietary software that restricts the user's freedoms.</li>
+              <li>Runs on <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary software</a> that restricts the user's freedoms.</li>
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                  Apple app stores use <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">DRM</a> to restrict what you can do with your purchases.
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               <li>Comes crawling with <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareInMacOS">spyware</a>.</li>
-             <li>Also bad: MacBook Air, Asus Zenbook, Lenovo Ideapad</li>
+             <li>Avoid: MacBook Air (and MacBook Pro)</li>
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             <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Microsoft Surface</h5>
               <ul class="cons">
- <li>Runs on proprietary software that profits from treating the user as a product&mdash;<a href="https://edri.org/microsofts-new-small-print-how-your-personal-data-abused/">each account is assigned an advertising ID</a> to help Microsoft sell user
-                data.
-              </li>
- <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
- <li>Also bad: Lenovo Yoga, iPad, Windows Ink</li>
+               <li><a href="arstechnica.com/information-technology/2015/07/windows-10-updates-to-be-automatic-and-mandatory-for-home-users/">Forced "upgrades"</a> give Microsoft a backdoor to do anything they want with your apps or data--including <a href="www.ghacks.net/2015/11/24/beware-latest-windows-10-update-may-remove-programs-automatically/">removing them</a>.</li>
+               <li>When major security bugs are found, the <a href="https://web.archive.org/web/20130622044225/http://blogs.computerworlduk.com/open-enterprise/2013/06/how-can-any-company-ever-trust-microsoft-again/index.htm">NSA gets the option to exploit them</a> before they're fixed.
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             <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: MakerBot</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
               <li>
-                MakerWare software is proprietary, restricting freedom and stifling innovation.
+                MakerWare software is proprietary, <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">restricting freedom and stifling innovation</a>.
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                 MakerBot was founded with a more freedom-respecting philosophy, but has since <a href="https://www.cnet.com/news/pulling-back-from-open-source-hardware-makerbot-angers-some-adherents/">announced an increasingly proprietary approach</a> and distanced itself from the community that formed around it.
              <p>Many consider music essential to the richness of the human experience. Thanks to the <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/guide/audio">many artists, producers, record labels, and shops</a> highlighted on <a href="https://defectivebydesign.org">Defective by Design</a>, the rights-respecting options are nearly endless. Check out music from great labels and artists, including:</p>
               <li><a href="http://www.dischord.com/">Dischord Records</a>, a classic punk label providing music since 1980.</li>
              <li><a href="https://folkways.si.edu/">Folkways</a>, courtesy of the Smithsonian Institute.</li>
-             <li><a href="http://www.mergerecords.com/shop">Merge Records</a>, home to Grammy-winning and well-loved indie darlings.</li>
-             <li><a href="http://www.nin.com/">Nine Inch Nails</a>, the industrial rock band fronted by Trent Reznor.</li>
-             <li><a href="https://www.theymightbegiants.com/">They Might Be Giants</a>, delivering tunes to you since the 1980s.</li>
+             <li><a href="https://www.emusic.com/">Emusic</a> is the Web's second largest music store.</li>
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                       <li>X200, T400, iPhone, and ISP-provided router images are in the public domain.</li>
                       <li>LulzBot 3D printer photo by Aleph Objects is licensed under a <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/deed.en_US">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported.</a></li>
                       <li>ThinkPenguin with GNU and both ThinkPenguin router images by ThinkPenguin are licensed under a <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/deed.en_US">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported.</a></li>
-                      <li>Technoethical Replicant N2, Wi-Fi Dongle, and X200T by Technoethical 2016-2017 licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike Unported 4.0</a>.</li>
-                     <li>Photo of bookshelf by <a href="https://www.flickr.com/photos/seeminglee/4556156477/">See-ming Lee</a> licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 2.0 Unported</a>
+                      <li>Technoethical Replicant N2, Wi-Fi Dongle, and X200T by Technoethical 2016-2017 licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike Unported 4.0</a>.</li>
+                     <li>Photo of bookshelf by <a href="https://www.flickr.com/photos/seeminglee/4556156477/">See-ming Lee</a> licensed under <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 2.0 Unported</a>
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