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@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@ newest Apple or Google product is a great gift in itself, and one that
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-            <a class="action-button" href="https://www.fsf.org/share?u=https://www.fsf.org/givingguide/" alt="Check out the Free Software Foundation Ethical Tech Giving Guide">Tell your friends</a>
+            <a class="action-button" href="https://www.fsf.org/share?u=https://www.fsf.org/givingguide/&amp;t=Check out the Free Software Foundation Ethical Tech Giving Guide">Tell your friends</a>
             <p>
                          Use the hashtag <span class="label label-default">#givefreely</span> on social media sites like <a href="https://fsf.org/twitter">Twitter</a>, <a href="https://mastodon.social">Mastodon</a>, or <a href="https://www.gnu.org/software/social/">GNU social</a>. You might get a gift out of it yourself!
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@@ -739,8 +739,8 @@ advertisers.</p>
 
             <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Google Pixel</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
-<li>The Google Pixel line (and most Android devices) are not only
-  restricted by Widevine DRM, they also come with
+<li>The Google Pixel line (and most Android devices) aren't just
+  restricted by Widevine DRM. They also come with
 <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary</a> Google apps that
 <a href="https://www.gnu.org/proprietary/malware-google.html">subjugate users</a>.</li>
                        </ul>
@@ -1138,7 +1138,7 @@ numbers, which aids in password generation and encryption.</p>
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             <h5 class="text-center">DRM-free Music</h5>
 <ul class="pros">
-  <p>Despite the efforts of companies like Spotify, we can still dance to music in the free world. Thanks to the <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/guide/audio">artists, producers, record labels, and shops</a> highlighted on on our <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/guide/">Guide to DRM-free Living</a>>, the rights-respecting options are nearly endless. Check out music from great labels and artists, including:</p>
+  <p>Despite the efforts of companies like Spotify, we can still dance to music in the free world. Thanks to the <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/guide/audio">artists, producers, record labels, and shops</a> highlighted on on our <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/guide/">Guide to DRM-free Living</a>, the rights-respecting options are nearly endless. Check out music from great labels and artists, including:</p>
 <li>All of the music on <a href="https://bandcamp.com">Bandcamp</a> is DRM-free and comes in a variety of formats, including patent-free ones like FLAC and Ogg Vorbis.</li>
 <li><a href="https://www.dischord.com/">Dischord Records</a>, a classic punk label providing music since 1980.</li>
 <li><a href="https://www.emusic.com/">Emusic</a> is a DRM-free replacement for services like Spotify and Apple Music.</li>
@@ -1312,14 +1312,14 @@ numbers, which aids in password generation and encryption.</p>
 
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-                    <p>This page by the Free Software Foundation is licensed under a <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0</a>.
+                    <p>This page by the Free Software Foundation is licensed under the <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0</a> license.
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-                                         <li>Purism product image licensed under the <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">Creative Commons Attribution ShareAlike 4.0</a> license.</li>
+                                         <li>Purism product image licensed under the <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0</a> license.</li>
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+                      <li>ThinkPenguin images are licensed under the <a href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0</a> license.</li> 
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