From fb718eb58a14da9a4cd6ca8761061765c299bb6e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Zak Rogoff <zak@fsf.org>
Date: Mon, 7 Mar 2016 11:39:03 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Improving sessions description for demonstration prep.

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 2016/program/generated-sessions.html | 28 ++++++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/2016/program/generated-sessions.html b/2016/program/generated-sessions.html
index 920f9969..0d3dc548 100755
--- a/2016/program/generated-sessions.html
+++ b/2016/program/generated-sessions.html
@@ -2189,22 +2189,26 @@ software and creative commons content.
    </p>
    <div class="collapse in" id="day-2-timeslot-14-session-4-collapse">
     <p>
-     Since 2013, the Free Software community has been fighting to
-     <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/we-dont-want-the-hollyweb">
-      keep Digital Restrictions Management out of Web standards
+     Since 2013, the Free Software community has been
+     <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/we-dont-want-the-hollywebhttps://www.defectivebydesign.org/we-dont-want-the-hollyweb">
+      fighting to keep Digital Restrictions Management out of Web standards
      </a>
-     , to preserve a free Web that puts users first. The campaign is coming to a head, and we have a unique opportunity to make our voices heard because a W3C meeting is happening simultaneously with LibrePlanet
+     , to preserve a free Web that puts users first. The campaign is coming to a head as the W3C standards body prepares to vote on the disastrous proposed standard. We have a unique opportunity to make our voices heard because a W3C meeting is happening simultaneously with LibrePlanet
      <em>
       in the same building
      </em>
-     .
-    </p>
-    <p>
-     We'll go over the campaign so far, then (optionally) make signs for the
-     <a href="https://libreplanet.org/2016/program/social.html#demonstration">
-      demonstration
-     </a>
-     outside a W3C event taking place at 20:00 the same evening. Volunteers are needed to marshal the demonstration -- please attend this session if you'd like to help.
+     . We will seize this opportunity with a demonstration at 20:00 the same evening outside an ongoing W3C event.
+     <strong>
+      Read more about the demonstration in the
+      <a href="https://libreplanet.org/2016/program/social.html#demonstration">
+       Social &amp; Community Events section
+      </a>
+      .
+     </strong>
+     You do not need to attend this session to attend the demonstration.
+    </p>
+    <p>
+     The session will start with an overview of the campaign's history and the current flashpoint, by organizers centrally involved in the effort to stop the proposal, then we'll (optionally) make signs for the demonstration. Volunteers are needed to help marshal the demonstration -- please attend this session if you'd like to help.
     </p>
    </div>
    <!-- day-2-timeslot-14-session-4-collapse end -->
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