From e3cda6491e0bf1eb273b164e04c2b8b446cc7f72 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Greg Farough Date: Thu, 17 Nov 2022 15:47:59 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] rephrasings --- v13/givingguide.html | 5 +++-- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/v13/givingguide.html b/v13/givingguide.html index a87785c..0ca6230 100644 --- a/v13/givingguide.html +++ b/v13/givingguide.html @@ -550,7 +550,8 @@ they're the rare exception to the apparent rule that devices should mistreat their users. We encourage you to take a close look at our recommendations and see if they might work for you or a loved one.

This year, choose freedom

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To minimize ecological waste and encourage free software adoption, we advise you to end that cycle of forced obsolescence and user exploitation, and opt to try running free software on a device you already own. If you're unlucky enough to get a gift that doesn't respect your freedom, you can still help others avoid it by documenting its ethical pitfalls. If you're a strongly technical user, this year's Guide also lists devices that need a little help or development to cross the freedom "finish line."

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To minimize ecological waste and encourage free software adoption, we advise you to end that cycle of forced obsolescence and user exploitation, and opt to try running free software on a device you already own.

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If you're unlucky enough to get a gift that doesn't respect your freedom, you can still help others avoid it by documenting its ethical pitfalls. And if you're a strongly technical user, this year's Guide also lists devices that need a little help or development to cross the freedom "finish line."

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