From 74646bb1021aaa154a332addeec857bc0c65180b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Greg Farough <gregf@gnu.org>
Date: Fri, 18 Nov 2022 16:20:58 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] adjust notes

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@@ -962,11 +962,12 @@ it's the laptop that's most frequently used in the FSF office!</p>
             <div class="good col-md-6 col-sm-6">
 	      <h5 class="text-center">Promising Communities & Companies</h5>
 	      <ul class="pros">
-		<p>Each and every day, free software reaches more devices and is used in more and more interesting contexts. While we haven't evaluated these products specifically in our <a href="https://ryf.fsf.org">RYF program</a>, we're including mentions of certain communities who are going in the right direction when it comes to freedom, but who aren't fully there yet. They're already making waves, but need the help of technical users in crossing the freedom "finish line" to full acceptability.</p>
+		<p>Each and every day, free software reaches more devices and is used in more and more interesting contexts. While we haven't evaluated these products specifically in our <a href="https://ryf.fsf.org">RYF program</a>, we're including mentions of certain communities who are going in the right direction when it comes to freedom, but who aren't fully there yet. They're already making waves, but need the help of developers or technical users in crossing the freedom "finish line" to full acceptability.</p>
 		<li><a href="https://mntre.com/">MNT</a>'s Reform laptop is promising from a free software perspective. If the nonfree RAM training were to be replaced by the community, we have reason to believe it would be fully compatible with your freedom.</li>
 		<li><a href="https://puri.sm">Purism</a>'s devices ship with the PureOS distribution of the GNU/Linux operating system, one that is more freedom-friendly than popular distributions like Mint or Ubuntu.</li>
-		<li><a href="https://pine64.org">PINE64</a> is a company and user community making a variety of laptops, smartwatches, ereaders, and more.</li>
+		<li><a href="https://pine64.org">PINE64</a> is a company and user community making a variety of laptops, smartwatches, ereaders, and more. The freedom status of these devices vary, but the project has made positive progress in a short time, piquing the interest of many in the free software community.</li>
 	      </ul>
+	      <p>If you know of a project or company we've missed who are earnestly working to free their devices, but who need a little help in doing so, <a href="mailto:campaigns@fsf.org">please let us know!</a></p>
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 	      <h5 class="text-center">Caveats</h5>
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