From 69477a3540b73301f73b56a8cf6d579e72572e2f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dana Morgenstein Date: Wed, 22 Nov 2017 11:00:51 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] fixed refs to Wi-Fi and emdashes --- v8/givingguide.html | 16 ++++---- v8/givingguide.html~ | 98 ++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------- 2 files changed, 57 insertions(+), 57 deletions(-) diff --git a/v8/givingguide.html b/v8/givingguide.html index 27bc6f1..4c38568 100644 --- a/v8/givingguide.html +++ b/v8/givingguide.html @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@

Give the gift of freedom!

A new phone or computer can be the highlight of the holidays, but with proprietary software lurking under the wrapping paper, your thoughtful gift may be more naughty than nice.

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This guide replaces these holiday humbugs with better devices from ethical companies -- no creepy remote deletion of files, no punitive and mean rules about copying and sharing. Just products and software that respect the freedom and privacy of your loved ones: gifts you can feel good about.

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This guide replaces these holiday humbugs with better devices from ethical companies—no creepy remote deletion of files, no punitive and mean rules about copying and sharing. Just products and software that respect the freedom and privacy of your loved ones: gifts you can feel good about.

Plus, our crib notes below will help you explain why this version is better than the one they've heard of (and spread the word about software freedom, too).

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Stay away from: Microsoft Windows
Stay away from: Microsoft Surface
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  • - Apple uses DRM to block competing software. + Apple uses Digital Restrictions Management (DRM) to block competing software.
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    Technoethical

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  • Durable hardware is meant to last and is easy to repair.
  • Created by a small business that replaces all restrictive components from a stock laptop.
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    Stay away from: Windows
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    Stay away from: Microsoft Windows
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  • X200, T400, iPhone, and ISP-provided router images are in the public domain.
  • LulzBot 3D printer photo by Aleph Objects is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported.
  • ThinkPenguin with GNU and both ThinkPenguin router images by ThinkPenguin are licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported.
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  • Technoethical Replicant N2, Wi-Fi Dongle, and X200t by Technoethical 2016-2017 licensed under CC BY-SA 4.0.
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  • LibreTea computer with modular chassis image by Luke Kenneth Casson Leighton licensed underCC BY 4.0.
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  • Technoethical Replicant N2, Wi-Fi Dongle, and X200T by Technoethical 2016-2017 licensed under CC BY-SA 4.0.
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    The FSF is a nonprofit with a worldwide mission to advance software freedom — learn about our history and work.

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    Version 7.0. Copyright © 2004-2016 +

    Version 8.0. Copyright © 2004-2017 Free Software Foundation , Inc. -- 2.25.1