From 341e82dd7021dd7142658caf4a4b85f6bb5cc058 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Zak Rogoff <zak@fsf.org>
Date: Fri, 18 Oct 2013 15:16:18 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Changing membership ask and first paragraph.

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diff --git a/server/staging/lpc14/index.html b/server/staging/lpc14/index.html
index 370ae53a..3e00984f 100644
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+++ b/server/staging/lpc14/index.html
@@ -164,15 +164,14 @@
 
 			<div class="margin-top"> <!-- start of LP14 text -->
 			  <p class="lead">
-				LibrePlanet is an annual conference of the global free
-				software community. Join software developers, policy
+				LibrePlanet is an annual free software conference where newcomers are always welcome. Join software developers, policy
 				experts, activists and computer users to learn skills,
-				share accomplishments and face challenges. Newcomers
-				are always welcome, and FSF members attend gratis! <a href="https://my.fsf.org/associate/support_freedom">Become a member now.</a></p>
+				share accomplishments and face challenges.
 
 			  <p>
 				 This year, the theme of LibrePlanet is "Free Software, Free Society." How can free software protect journalists, whistleblowers, activists, and regular computer users from government and corporate surveillance? How can free software, or free software values like copyleft, community development, and transparency, be used by people fighting to create free societies around the world? What challenges are standing between us and our goal of free software ubiquity? With your help, we'll tackle these questions and more at LibrePlanet 2014. 
 			  </p>
+<p>Students receive discounted admission and FSF members attend LibrePlanet at no cost! <a href="https://my.fsf.org/associate/support_freedom">Become a member now.</a></p>
 			</div> <!-- end of LP14 text -->
 
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