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To participate in the LibrePlanet 2021 workshops, please register at the Supporter level. Doing so will grant you exclusive access to sign up and attend.

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To guarantee the highly interactive nature of the workshops, we have to limit capacity for them, which means that they require separate registration, which will be processed on a first come, first serve basis and registration will be checked before the workshop begins.

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Because of the highly interactive nature of the workshops, we have to limit capacity for them, which means that we require separate registration for them. Registration will be on a first-come-first-served basis, and will be checked before the workshop begins.

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Please keep this in mind when you register. Don't register if you can't make it, and if you've registered and find you will not be able to attend, let us know at campaigns@fsf.org, and we will open up your spot to someone else.

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Please keep this in mind when you register. Please don't register if you can't make it, and, if you've registered but find you will not be able to attend, please let us know, at campaigns@fsf.org, so we can free up your spot for someone else. Thank you for your understanding

We're excited to be presenting the following workshops this year:

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Free Software Data Fortress for Your Home

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Free software data fortress for your home