From 183df70fc1ba41ab9b34a642865b3c8ce8daaaab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Molly de Blanc <molly@fsf.org>
Date: Wed, 22 Nov 2017 12:20:34 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] fixed links.

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             <h1>Give the gift of freedom!</h1>
 
 	    <p>A new phone or computer can be the highlight of the holidays, but with proprietary software lurking under the wrapping paper, your thoughtful gift may be more naughty than nice.</p>
-<p>This guide replaces these holiday humbugs with better devices from ethical companies&mdash;no <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">creepy remote deletion of files or  punitive and mean rules about copying and sharing</a>. Just products and software that respect the freedom and privacy of your loved ones: gifts you can feel good about.</p>
+<p>This guide replaces these holiday humbugs with better devices from ethical companies&mdash;no creepy remote deletion of files or  punitive and mean rules about copying and sharing. Just products and software that respect the freedom and privacy of your loved ones: gifts you can feel good about.</p>
 <p>Plus, our crib notes below will help you explain why this version is better than the one they've heard of (and spread the word about software freedom, too).</p>
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@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
             <ul class="cons">
               <li>Comes with no shortage of <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareIniThings">spyware</a>.</li>
               <li>
-                iOS is a fully proprietary operating system, giving Apple control over the software on the devices.
+                iOS is a fully <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary operating system</a>, giving Apple control over the software on the devices.
               </li>
               <li>
                 Apple uses <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">Digital Restrictions Management (DRM)</a> to block competing software.
@@ -311,7 +311,7 @@
             </ul>
             <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Microsoft Windows</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
-             <li>Runs on proprietary software that profits from treating the user as a product&mdash;<a href="https://edri.org/microsofts-new-small-print-how-your-personal-data-abused/">each account is assigned an advertising ID</a> to help Microsoft sell user
+             <li>Runs on <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary software</a> that profits from treating the user as a product&mdash;<a href="https://edri.org/microsofts-new-small-print-how-your-personal-data-abused/">each account is assigned an advertising ID</a> to help Microsoft sell user
                 data.
               </li>
               <!-- Commented out pending citation or confirmation <li>Includes Management Engine, a hardware-based backdoor that gives Intel a permanent backdoor into your computer.</li>-->
@@ -405,7 +405,7 @@
               <li>Created by a small business that replaces all restrictive components from a stock laptop.</li>
           <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Apple</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
-              <li>Runs on proprietary software that restricts the user's freedoms.</li>
+              <li>Runs on <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary software</a> that restricts the user's freedoms.</li>
               <li>
                  Apple app stores use <a href="https://www.defectivebydesign.org/what_is_drm_digital_restrictions_management">DRM</a> to restrict what you can do with your purchases.
               </li>
@@ -480,7 +480,7 @@
 	      </ul>
             <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: Microsoft Surface</h5>
               <ul class="cons">
- <li>Runs on proprietary software that profits from treating the user as a product&mdash;<a href="https://edri.org/microsofts-new-small-print-how-your-personal-data-abused/">each account is assigned an advertising ID</a> to help Microsoft sell user
+ <li>Runs on <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary software</a> that profits from treating the user as a product&mdash;<a href="https://edri.org/microsofts-new-small-print-how-your-personal-data-abused/">each account is assigned an advertising ID</a> to help Microsoft sell user
                 data.
               </li>
  <li>Mandatory Windows updates force users to test potentially unstable new versions. <a href="https://www.fsf.org/campaigns/windows">Read more about Windows's abuses.</a></li>
@@ -804,7 +804,7 @@
             <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: MakerBot</h5>
             <ul class="cons">
               <li>
-                MakerWare software is proprietary, restricting freedom and stifling innovation.
+                MakerWare software is proprietary, <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">restricting freedom and stifling innovation</a>.
               </li>
               <li>
                 MakerBot was founded with a more freedom-respecting philosophy, but has since <a href="https://www.cnet.com/news/pulling-back-from-open-source-hardware-makerbot-angers-some-adherents/">announced an increasingly proprietary approach</a> and distanced itself from the community that formed around it.
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