From: Zak Rogoff <zak@montage.office.fsf.org>
Date: Thu, 5 Mar 2015 20:14:27 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: Fixing it even more-er.
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Fixing it even more-er.
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-<p class="lead">LibrePlanet is an annual conference for free software enthusiasts. LibrePlanet brings together software developers, policy experts, activists and computer users to learn skills, share accomplishments and face challenges to software freedom. Newcomers are always welcome, and LibrePlanet 2015 will feature programming for all ages and experience levels. This year, the theme of LibrePlanet is "Free Software Everywhere." The weekend's sessions touch on the many places and ways that free software is used around the world, as well as strategizing ways to make free software ubiquitous.</p>
+<p class="lead">LibrePlanet is an annual conference for free software enthusiasts. LibrePlanet brings together software developers, policy experts, activists and computer users to learn skills, share accomplishments and face challenges to software freedom. Newcomers are always welcome, and LibrePlanet 2015 will feature programming for all ages and experience levels.</p>
 
-<p>We'll talk about some contexts where free software is thriving, and some others where it needs a push. We'll hear from people who have worked to gain a foothold for free software in their workplace or community. We'll explore the state of software freedom on all of the myriad pieces of hardware we use, including laptops, phones, tablets, and even coffee makers. At LibrePlanet 2015, we're taking software freedom around the world, to outer space, and through all kinds of industries, governments, organizations, fields of study, and communities.</p>
+<p>This year, the theme of LibrePlanet is "Free Software Everywhere." The weekend's sessions touch on the many places and ways that free software is used around the world, as well as strategizing ways to make free software ubiquitous. We'll talk about some contexts where free software is thriving, and some others where it needs a push. We'll hear from people who have worked to gain a foothold for free software in their workplace or community. We'll explore the state of software freedom on all of the myriad pieces of hardware we use, including laptops, phones, tablets, and even coffee makers. At LibrePlanet 2015, we're taking software freedom around the world, to outer space, and through all kinds of industries, governments, organizations, fields of study, and communities.</p>
 
 <p>FSF members and students attend LibrePlanet at no cost! <a href="https://my.fsf.org/associate/support_freedom">Become a member now</a>.<!-- Registration opens in October - sign up above to receive updates.--></p>