From: Zak Rogoff <zak@fsf.org>
Date: Wed, 18 Jun 2014 21:29:07 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: Propagating replacement of section 6 to other pages.
X-Git-Url: https://vcs.fsf.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=bbfaa44dc67352655f3f27a27a648dccf63cdff3;p=enc-live.git

Propagating replacement of section 6 to other pages.
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diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 04c76f9..79b7f32 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@
 					<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ section introduction: interspersed text  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
 				<div class="section-intro">
 					<h2><em>#2</em> Make your keys</h2>
-						<p>To use the GnuPG system, you'll need a public key and a private key (known together as a keypair). Each is a long string of randomly generated numbers that are unique to you. Your public and private keys are linked together by a special mathematical function.</p>
+						<p>To use the GnuPG system, you'll need a public key and a private key (known together as a keypair). Each is a long string of randomly generated numbers and letters that are unique to you. Your public and private keys are linked together by a special mathematical function.</p>
 
 <p>Your public key isn't like a physical key, because it's stored in the open in an online directory called a keyserver. People download it and use it, along with GnuPG, to encrypt emails they send to you. You can think of the keyserver as phonebook, where people who want to send you an encrypted email look up your public key.</p>
 
@@ -427,15 +427,15 @@
 					</div><!-- End .main -->
 				</div><!-- End #step-lost_key .step-->
 
-				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
+				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ 
 				<div id="step-5d" class="step">
 					<div class="main">
 						<h3>Make your public key part of your online identity</h3>
 						<p> First add your public key fingerprint to your email signature, then compose an email to at least five of your friends, telling them you just set up GnuPG and mentioning your public key fingerprint. Link to this guide and ask them to join you. Don't forget that there's also an awesome <a href="infographic.html">infographic to share.</a></p>
 
 <p class="notes">Start writing your public key fingerprint anywhere someone would see your email address: your social media profiles, blog, Website, or business card. (At the Free Software Foundation, we put ours on our <a href="https://fsf.org/about/staff">staff page</a>.) We need to get our culture to the point that we feel like something is missing when we see an email address without a public key fingerprint.</p>
-					</div><!-- End .main -->
-				</div><!-- End #step-5d .step-->
+					</div><!-- End .main 
+				</div> End #step-5d .step-->
 
 
 			</div>
diff --git a/mac.html b/mac.html
index e324cfc..021d041 100644
--- a/mac.html
+++ b/mac.html
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
 					<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ section introduction: interspersed text  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
 				<div class="section-intro">
 					<h2><em>#2</em> Make your keys</h2>
-						<p>To use the GnuPG system, you'll need a public key and a private key (known together as a keypair). Each is a long string of randomly generated numbers that are unique to you. Your public and private keys are linked together by a special mathematical function.</p>
+						<p>To use the GnuPG system, you'll need a public key and a private key (known together as a keypair). Each is a long string of randomly generated numbers and letters that are unique to you. Your public and private keys are linked together by a special mathematical function.</p>
 
 <p>Your public key isn't like a physical key, because it's stored in the open in an online directory called a keyserver. People download it and use it, along with GnuPG, to encrypt emails they send to you. You can think of the keyserver as phonebook, where people who want to send you an encrypted email look up your public key.</p>
 
@@ -407,14 +407,14 @@
 					</div><!-- End .main -->
 				</div><!-- End #step-lost_key .step-->
 
-				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
+				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ 
 				<div id="step-5d" class="step">
 					<div class="main">
 						<h3>Make your public key part of your online identity</h3>
 						<p> First add your public key fingerprint to your email signature, then compose an email to at least five of your friends, telling them you just set up GnuPG and mentioning your public key fingerprint. Link to this guide and ask them to join you. Don't forget that there's also an awesome <a href="infographic.html">infographic to share.</a></p>
 
 <p class="notes">Start writing your public key fingerprint anywhere someone would see your email address: your social media profiles, blog, Website, or business card. (At the Free Software Foundation, we put ours on our <a href="https://fsf.org/about/staff">staff page</a>.) We need to get our culture to the point that we feel like something is missing when we see an email address without a public key fingerprint.</p>
-					</div><!-- End .main -->
+					</div><!-- End .main 
 				</div><!-- End #step-5d .step-->
 
 
diff --git a/windows.html b/windows.html
index dd4a30b..091eb03 100644
--- a/windows.html
+++ b/windows.html
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
 					<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ section introduction: interspersed text  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
 				<div class="section-intro">
 					<h2><em>#2</em> Make your keys</h2>
-						<p>To use the GnuPG system, you'll need a public key and a private key (known together as a keypair). Each is a long string of randomly generated numbers that are unique to you. Your public and private keys are linked together by a special mathematical function.</p>
+						<p>To use the GnuPG system, you'll need a public key and a private key (known together as a keypair). Each is a long string of randomly generated numbers and letters that are unique to you. Your public and private keys are linked together by a special mathematical function.</p>
 
 <p>Your public key isn't like a physical key, because it's stored in the open in an online directory called a keyserver. People download it and use it, along with GnuPG, to encrypt emails they send to you. You can think of the keyserver as phonebook, where people who want to send you an encrypted email look up your public key.</p>
 
@@ -405,14 +405,14 @@
 					</div><!-- End .main -->
 				</div><!-- End #step-lost_key .step-->
 
-				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
+				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ 
 				<div id="step-5d" class="step">
 					<div class="main">
 						<h3>Make your public key part of your online identity</h3>
 						<p> First add your public key fingerprint to your email signature, then compose an email to at least five of your friends, telling them you just set up GnuPG and mentioning your public key fingerprint. Link to this guide and ask them to join you. Don't forget that there's also an awesome <a href="infographic.html">infographic to share.</a></p>
 
 <p class="notes">Start writing your public key fingerprint anywhere someone would see your email address: your social media profiles, blog, Website, or business card. (At the Free Software Foundation, we put ours on our <a href="https://fsf.org/about/staff">staff page</a>.) We need to get our culture to the point that we feel like something is missing when we see an email address without a public key fingerprint.</p>
-					</div><!-- End .main -->
+					</div><!-- End .main 
 				</div><!-- End #step-5d .step-->