From: Molly de Blanc <molly@fsf.org>
Date: Tue, 4 Sep 2018 20:22:37 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: updated per team feedback on text.
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updated per team feedback on text.
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diff --git a/2019/includes/banner.html b/2019/includes/banner.html
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                             <!-- Heads up! When updating this date and place information,
                                  remember to update it in the small
                                  screen navbar too (see below) -->
-			      <p><br><strong>March 23 - 24th<br />
+			      <p><br><strong>March 23 - 24th, 2019<br />
 			      Greater Boston Area</strong></p>
 			  </div>
                           <!-- #top-right-desktop start -->
diff --git a/2019/includes/home-content.html b/2019/includes/home-content.html
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-<p class="lead">
+<p>
     LibrePlanet is an annual conference hosted by the
     <a href="https://www.fsf.org">Free Software Foundation</a> for
     free software enthusiasts and anyone who cares about the
@@ -9,9 +9,7 @@
     freedom. Newcomers are always welcome, and LibrePlanet 2019
     will feature programming for all ages and experience levels.
 </p>
-
-<!--Theme paragraphs -->
 <p>
-LibrePlanet 2019's theme is "Trailblazing Free Software." In 1983, the free software movement was born with the publication of the GNU Manifesto. FSF founder Richard Stallman saw that proprietary code -- that which could not be shared -- prevented people from changing the computer code they were using (for example, to fix a problem in the code, or to make it suit the user's purpose). And by emphasizing a community-oriented philosophy of sharing code freely, people could more easily make useful software -- new concepts were more easily brought to life because they could build off others' copylefted code, and they could pay forward those benefits by allowing others to view their code and offer their own changes. These packages have great potential to become widely used.
+LibrePlanet 2019's theme is <b>"Trailblazing Free Software</b>." In 1983, the free software movement was born with the publication of the GNU Manifesto. Free Software Foundation founder Richard Stallman saw that proprietary code -- that which could not be shared -- prevented people from changing the computer code they were using (for example, to fix a problem in the code, or to make it suit the user's purpose). And by emphasizing a community-oriented philosophy of sharing code freely, people could more easily make useful software -- new concepts were more easily brought to life because they could build off others' copylefted code, and they could pay forward those benefits by allowing others to view their code and offer their own changes. These packages have great potential to become widely used.
 </p>
 
diff --git a/2019/index.html b/2019/index.html
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--- a/2019/index.html
+++ b/2019/index.html
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 		      alt="[ Deb Nicholson, wearing a black dress, stands next to Mariah Villarreal, wearing a grey cardigan and LibrePlanet 2018 tshirt. They are both smiling. ]">
 	    <p class="carousel-caption-center">
 
-		Explore a wealth of <a href="https://www.libreplanet.org/2018/program/index.html">session
+		Explore a wealth of <a href="https://www.libreplanet.org/2018/program/">session
 		videos and slides</a><br> from LibrePlanet 2018.</p>
 
         </li>
diff --git a/2019/sponsors/index.html b/2019/sponsors/index.html
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+++ b/2019/sponsors/index.html
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
 <h1>LibrePlanet 2019 Sponsorship and Exhibit Hall</h1>
 
-<p><b><a href="https://my.fsf.org/civicrm/event/info?id=80&reset=1">Register as a Sponsor of Exhibitor!</a></b> Please only use this link after confirmation from the FSF.</p>
+<p><b><a href="https://my.fsf.org/civicrm/event/info?id=80&reset=1">Register as a Sponsor or Exhibitor!</a></b> Please only use this link after confirmation from the FSF.</p>
 
 <b>Sponsors</b>