From: Zak Rogoff <zak@montage.office.fsf.org>
Date: Wed, 8 Jul 2015 21:38:30 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: Improving the feel of the Edward down message and propagating it to other operating... 
X-Git-Url: https://vcs.fsf.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=6fdf67defdbbe46977cdf306399afac235f06cf0;p=enc-live.git

Improving the feel of the Edward down message and propagating it to other operating systems.
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diff --git a/en/index.html b/en/index.html
index 7700d0f..76fad3b 100644
--- a/en/index.html
+++ b/en/index.html
@@ -257,7 +257,9 @@
 					<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ section introduction: interspersed text  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
 				<div class="section-intro">
 						<h2><em>#3</em> Try it out!</h2>
-						<p>Now you'll try a test correspondence with a computer program named Edward, which knows how to use encryption. Except where noted, these are the same steps you'd follow when corresponding with a real, live person. <em>Note: Edward is currently having some technical difficulties, so he may take a long time to respond, or not respond at all. We're sorry about this and we're working hard to fix it. Your key will still work even without testing with Edward.</em></p>
+						<p>Now you'll try a test correspondence with a computer program named Edward, which knows how to use encryption. Except where noted, these are the same steps you'd follow when corresponding with a real, live person.</p>
+
+						<p><em>Oops! Edward is currently having some technical difficulties, so he may take a long time to respond, or not respond at all. We're sorry about this and we're working hard to fix it. Your key will still work even without testing with Edward.</em></p>
 				</div><!-- End .section-intro -->
 
 				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
diff --git a/en/mac.html b/en/mac.html
index b2b9bb4..9d823d4 100644
--- a/en/mac.html
+++ b/en/mac.html
@@ -257,6 +257,8 @@
 				<div class="section-intro">
 						<h2><em>#3</em> Try it out!</h2>
 						<p>Now you'll try a test correspondence with a computer program named Edward, which knows how to use encryption. Except where noted, these are the same steps you'd follow when corresponding with a real, live person.</p>
+						
+						<p><em>Oops! Edward is currently having some technical difficulties, so he may take a long time to respond, or not respond at all. We're sorry about this and we're working hard to fix it. Your key will still work even without testing with Edward.</em></p>
 				</div><!-- End .section-intro -->
 
 				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ -->
diff --git a/en/windows.html b/en/windows.html
index 4488334..62a9caf 100644
--- a/en/windows.html
+++ b/en/windows.html
@@ -258,6 +258,8 @@
 				<div class="section-intro">
 						<h2><em>#3</em> Try it out!</h2>
 						<p>Now you'll try a test correspondence with a computer program named Edward, which knows how to use encryption. Except where noted, these are the same steps you'd follow when corresponding with a real, live person.</p>
+
+						<p><em>Oops! Edward is currently having some technical difficulties, so he may take a long time to respond, or not respond at all. We're sorry about this and we're working hard to fix it. Your key will still work even without testing with Edward.</em></p>
 				</div><!-- End .section-intro -->
 
 				<!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step  ~~~~~~~~~ -->