From: Thérèse Godefroy <godef.th@free.fr>
Date: Fri, 22 Jun 2018 15:28:44 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: en: reword security warnings (enc 5c3bffb)
X-Git-Url: https://vcs.fsf.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=64af8734786ca921b5e418dd725c28e120040ede;p=enc-live.git

en: reword security warnings (enc 5c3bffb)
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diff --git a/en/index.html b/en/index.html
index 858180f..5371ffe 100644
--- a/en/index.html
+++ b/en/index.html
@@ -153,9 +153,6 @@ but provide extra features.</p>
 <p>If you already have an email program, you can skip to <a
 href="#step-1b">Step 1.b</a>.</p>
 
-<p class="notes">There are serious security flaws in GnuPG versions prior to 2.2.8. Install GnuPG versions 2.2.8 or 1.4.23 or later. There are also known issues with GPGTools prior to 2018.3. Make sure you have the most recent version of GPGTools.</p>
-
-
 </div><!-- End .section-intro -->
 
 <!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step ~~~~~~~~~ -->
@@ -237,7 +234,13 @@ so, skip this step.</p>
 <p>If not, search "Enigmail" with the search bar in the upper right. You
 can take it from here. Restart your email program when you're done.</p>
 
-<p>Enigmail versions prior to 2.0.7 have serious security issues. Make sure to install version 2.0.7 or later.</p>
+<p>There are major security flaws in versions of GnuPG prior to 2.2.8, and
+Enigmail prior to 2.0.7. Make sure you have GnuPG 2.2.8 and Enigmail 2.0.7,
+or later versions.</p>
+
+<p>Note: As of June 18, 2018, GnuPG 2.2.8 is unavailable for Debian stable and
+testing.</p>
+
 
 <!-- ~~~~~~~~~ Troubleshooting ~~~~~~~~~ -->
 <div class="troubleshooting">
diff --git a/en/mac.html b/en/mac.html
index cbfd0de..08a99fc 100644
--- a/en/mac.html
+++ b/en/mac.html
@@ -151,8 +151,6 @@ you can access in a browser (like Gmail), but provide extra features.</p>
 <p>If you already have an email program, you can skip to <a
 href="#step-1b">Step 1.b</a>.</p>
 
-<p class="notes">There are serious security flaws in GnuPG versions prior to 2.2.8. Install GnuPG versions 2.2.8 or 1.4.23 or later. There are also known issues with GPGTools prior to 2018.3. Make sure you have the most recent version of GPGTools.</p>
-
 </div><!-- End .section-intro -->
 
 <!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step ~~~~~~~~~ -->
@@ -208,6 +206,9 @@ href="https://gpgtools.org/#gpgsuite">Download</a> and install it, choosing
 default options whenever asked. After it's installed, you can close any
 windows that it creates.</p>
 
+<p>There are major security flaws in versions of GnuPG provided by GPGTools
+prior to 2018.3. Make sure you have GPGTools 2018.3 or later.</p>
+
 </div><!-- End .main -->
 </div><!-- End #step1-b .step -->
 
@@ -239,7 +240,8 @@ so, skip this step.</p>
 <p>If not, search "Enigmail" with the search bar in the upper right. You
 can take it from here. Restart your email program when you're done.</p>
 
-<p>Enigmail versions prior to 2.0.7 have serious security issues. Make sure to install version 2.0.7 or later.</p>
+<p>There are major security flaws in Enigmail prior to version 2.0.7. Make
+sure you have Enigmail 2.0.7 or later.</p>
 
 <!-- ~~~~~~~~~ Troubleshooting ~~~~~~~~~ -->
 <div class="troubleshooting">
diff --git a/en/windows.html b/en/windows.html
index 406589c..c626e21 100644
--- a/en/windows.html
+++ b/en/windows.html
@@ -151,8 +151,6 @@ you can access in a browser (like Gmail), but provide extra features.</p>
 <p>If you already have an email program, you can skip to <a
 href="#step-1b">Step 1.b</a>.</p>
 
-<p class="notes">There are serious security flaws in GnuPG versions prior to 2.2.8. Install GnuPG versions 2.2.8 or 1.4.23 or later. There are also known issues with GPGTools prior to 2018.3. Make sure you have the most recent version of GPGTools.</p>
-
 </div><!-- End .section-intro -->
 
 <!-- ~~~~~~~~~ a div for each step ~~~~~~~~~ -->
@@ -208,6 +206,9 @@ href="https://www.gpg4win.org/">Download</a> and install it, choosing default
 options whenever asked. After it's installed, you can close any windows that
 it creates.</p>
 
+<p>There are major security flaws in versions of GnuPG provided by GPG4Win
+prior to 3.1.2. Make sure you have GPG4Win 3.1.2 or later.</p>
+
 </div><!-- End .main -->
 </div><!-- End #step1-b .step -->
 
@@ -239,7 +240,8 @@ so, skip this step.</p>
 <p>If not, search "Enigmail" with the search bar in the upper right. You
 can take it from here. Restart your email program when you're done.</p>
 
-<p>Enigmail versions prior to 2.0.7 have serious security issues. Make sure to install version 2.0.7 or later.</p>
+<p>There are major security flaws in Enigmail prior to version 2.0.7. Make
+sure you have Enigmail 2.0.7 or later.</p>
 
 <!-- ~~~~~~~~~ Troubleshooting ~~~~~~~~~ -->
 <div class="troubleshooting">