From: Zak Rogoff <zak@montage.office.fsf.org>
Date: Fri, 21 Nov 2014 22:47:55 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: More edits for John.
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More edits for John.
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diff --git a/givingguide.html b/givingguide.html
index 1ce671d..b32ff3b 100755
--- a/givingguide.html
+++ b/givingguide.html
@@ -607,7 +607,7 @@ available Android devices ship with some proprietary software.)
               Soon-to-be federated to allow decentralized sharing.
             </li>
 
-            <li>Supports free video formats. And ability to choose a <a href="https://www.gnu.org/copyleft/">copyleft license</a>.</li>
+            <li>Supports free video formats and grants the ability to choose a <a href="https://www.gnu.org/copyleft/">copyleft license</a>.</li>
 
             <li>Source files can be attached to an upload, making it easy to remix people's work.</li>
 
@@ -773,13 +773,13 @@ available Android devices ship with some proprietary software.)
       <div class="footer_wrapper">
         <div>
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-            <a href="https://static.fsf.org/about">learn about our history and work.</a>
+            <a href="https://fsf.org/about">learn about our history and work.</a>
           </p>
         </div>
 
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-    				<a href="https://static.fsf.org/about/contact.html" title="Find out how to contact us">
+    				<a href="https://fsf.org/about/contact.html" title="Find out how to contact us">
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