From: Greg Farough <gregf@gnu.org>
Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2020 16:12:34 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: small correction
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small correction
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@@ -841,7 +841,7 @@ it's the laptop that's most frequently used in the FSF office!</p>
           <h5 class="text-center">Stay away from: MacBook Air and MacBook Pro</h5>
           <ul class="cons">
 	    <li>macOS is <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary">proprietary software</a> that restricts its users' freedoms.</li>
-		<li>In early November 2020, macOS started alerting Apple each time a user <a href="https://sneak.berlin/20201112/your-computer-isnt-yours/">opens an app</a>. Even though Apple is <a href="https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT202491">making changes</a> to the service, it just goes to show how bad they try to be until there is an outcry.</li>
+		<li>In early November 2020, macOS was caught alerting Apple each time a user <a href="https://sneak.berlin/20201112/your-computer-isnt-yours/">opens an app</a>. Even though Apple is <a href="https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT202491">making changes</a> to the service, it just goes to show how bad they try to be until there is an outcry.</li>
               <li>Apple has been <a href="https://motherboard.vice.com/en_us/article/evmeya/apple-iphone-right-to-repair-california">opposing the Right to Repair home user devices</a> for years, and maintains totalitarian control over their hardware.</li>
               <li>Comes crawling with <a href="https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/proprietary-surveillance.html#SpywareInMacOS">spyware</a> that rats on you to advertisers.</li>
             </ul>