From: Thérèse Godefroy <godef.th@free.fr>
Date: Wed, 16 Jul 2014 22:28:55 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: fr: reword explanations.
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fr: reword explanations.
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diff --git a/fr/kitchen/assemble-all-pages b/fr/kitchen/assemble-all-pages
index 3be163a0..6a1d3020 100755
--- a/fr/kitchen/assemble-all-pages
+++ b/fr/kitchen/assemble-all-pages
@@ -1,36 +1,36 @@
 #!/bin/bash
 
-# "assemble-all-pages" inserts the constant parts into all the HTML
-# templates in the working directory and creates the OS-specific pages by
-# removing the irrelevant text from a common file which contains all the
-# OS-variable parts.
+# "assemble-all-pages" inserts the constant parts into all HTML templates
+# in the working directory and creates the OS-specific pages by removing
+# the irrelevant text from a common file which contains the OS-variable
+# parts.
 
 # The page is NAME.html and the template is NAME.t.html. The template has
-# inclusion markers (similar to SSI directives, except for the "#") to
-# indicate where the constant parts are to be inserted, and deletion
+# inclusion markers (similar to SSI directives, except for the lack of "#")
+# to indicate where the constant parts are to be inserted, and deletion
 # markers to identify the borders of each deletion and indicate which
-# page(s) the text in between belongs to.
+# page(s) the text between them belongs to.
 
-# All the ingredients are is in enc/[lang]/kitchen/:
+# All the ingredients are is in [...]/enc/[lang]/kitchen/:
 
-# Script:       assemble-all-pages
+# Script:     assemble-all-pages
 
-# Templates:    confirmation.t.html
-#               index.t.html
-#               infographic.t.html
-#               next_steps.t.html
+# Templates:  confirmation.t.html
+#             index.t.html  (contains variable parts for mac and windows)
+#             infographic.t.html
+#             next_steps.t.html
 
-# Includes:     footer.html
-#               head1.html
-#               head2.html
-#               javascript.html
-#               translist.html
+# Includes:   footer.html
+#             head1.html
+#             head2.html
+#             javascript.html
+#             translist.html
 
-# To regenerate the pages in enc/[lang]/:
-# - In the terminal, cd to enc/[lang]/kitchen/ and enter:
+# To regenerate the pages in [...]/enc/[lang]/:
+# - In the terminal, cd to [...]/enc/[lang]/kitchen/ and enter:
 #                     $ ./assemble-all-pages
-# - In the file browser, display this directory (not its parent) and
-#   double-click on the script.
+# - Or, in the file browser, display the directory [...]/kitchen/ (not its
+#   parent) and double-click on the script.
 
 # And if anything goes wrong, you can do a git reset, right?    ;-)