From: Greg Farough <gregf@gnu.org>
Date: Fri, 18 Mar 2022 23:37:49 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: copyediting
X-Git-Url: https://vcs.fsf.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=1c84a19c23dec41851ddfc94ea1e4ba0e6978a36;p=libreplanet-static.git

copyediting
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diff --git a/2022/index.html b/2022/index.html
index b5cfa466..b6953d53 100755
--- a/2022/index.html
+++ b/2022/index.html
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 		 alt="[ LibrePlanet watch live image ]">
 	    <p class="carousel-caption-center">
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-	        <a href="https://libreplanet.org/2022/live">Watch LibrePlanet LIVE <a href="https://my.fsf.org/civicrm/event/info?reset=1&id=99">Register today so we know you attended and get the shop discount!</a>
+	        <a href="https://libreplanet.org/2022/live">Watch LibrePlanet live</a> -- and<a href="https://my.fsf.org/civicrm/event/info?reset=1&id=99"> register today,</a> so you get the shop discount!</a>
             </p>
        </li> 
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