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   <p><a href="#hack">Hack night</a></p>
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-<p>Below you can find the many ways to socialize at LibrePlanet 2024: Cultivating Community. Come as you are – everyone is welcome at all events! We celebrate all identities, ages, and ethnical backgrounds.</p> 
+<p>Below you can find some of the many ways to socialize at LibrePlanet 2024: Cultivating Community. Come as you are – everyone is welcome at all events! We celebrate all identities, ages, and ethnical backgrounds.</p> 
 <h2 id="office">Friday night "open" office</h2>
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 <p>On Friday night, the LibrePlanet festivities start early at the <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/contact/visiting-the-free-software-foundation">Free Software Foundation office</a>. Join us for socializing and snacks, but arrive early! We have a small office, so for everyone's safety, we're capping the attendance at fifty. FSF staffers will be letting more people in as others leave, so you may have to wait at the door.</p>