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             <h1>Make freedom your gift</h1>
            <p>As the headlines are filled with companies that abuse our digital liberties and autonomy through <a href="https://gnu.org/proprietary/">proprietary software</a>, it's now more important than ever to dodge these so-called "features" and choose freedom instead. Use our Giving Guide to make an informed decision about that piece of tech you're giving your loved ones -- or yourself!</p>
                        <h4>Don't throw it out</h4>
-           <p>To minimize ecological waste and encourage free software adoption, we advise you to end that cycle of forced obsolescence and user exploitation, and opt to try running <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw">free software</a> on a device you already own.</p>
+           <p>To minimize ecological waste and encourage free software adoption, we advise you to try running <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw">free software</a> on a device you already own.</p>
            <p>If you're unlucky enough to get a gift that doesn't respect your freedom, you can still <a href="https://h-node.org">help others avoid it</a> by documenting its ethical pitfalls. And if you're a strongly technical user, this year's Guide also lists devices that need a little help or development to cross the freedom "finish line."</p>
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