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 <h2 id="office">Friday night "open" office</h2>
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-<p>On Friday night, the LibrePlanet festitivies start early at the <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/contact/visiting-the-free-software-foundation">Free Software Foundation office</a>. Join us for socializing and snacks, but arrive early! We have a small office, so for everyone's safety, we're capping the attendance at fifty. FSF staffers will be letting more people in as others leave, so you may have to wait at the door.</p>
+<p>On Friday night, the LibrePlanet festivities start early at the <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/contact/visiting-the-free-software-foundation">Free Software Foundation office</a>. Join us for socializing and snacks, but arrive early! We have a small office, so for everyone's safety, we're capping the attendance at fifty. FSF staffers will be letting more people in as others leave, so you may have to wait at the door.</p>
 <p>You'll be able to pick up your conference badge (and
 purchase raffle tickets), allowing you to skip the line on Saturday
 morning! The FSF office is a short walk from the Downtown Crossing,
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 <h2 id="newcomer">Newcomer orientation</h2>
 <h3>Hosted by Savvy Smith</h3>
-<p>If this your first LibrePlanet? Looking to connect with other people and to get an overview what's going on? Ask at the registration booth for our newcomer orientation.</p>
+<p>Is this your first LibrePlanet? A very warm welcome! Looking to connect with other people and to get an overview what's going on? Ask at the registration booth for our newcomer orientation.</p>
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 <h2 id="BoF">Birds of a Feather social events</h2>
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