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-<p>Join us on LibreAdventure, our game / conference / social space!</p>
+<p>Join us on LibreAdventure, our virtual conference space!</p>
 
 <div class="area-link yellow-link" style="margin: 20px auto"><a href="https://play.libreadventure.org">Play LibreAdventure!</a></div>
 
-<p>LibreAdventure is a friendly fork of WorkAdventure, and allows participants
-to walk around the map, start voice and / or audio discussion, watch live
-streams, and interact with exhibitors. The game helps to create the vibe of an
-in-person event, so we hope that you have fun. It's also possible to interact
-with the main features of our conference site without this game.</p>
+<p>To recreate some of the social feel of an in-person conference, we created a virtual LibrePlanet space that will enable you to interact in a fun and organic way with other attendees. The <a href="https://vcs.fsf.org/?p=libreadventure.git;a=summary">LibreAdventure</a> conference space was made by forking the latest free version of WorkAdventure, and your conference registration nets you access. Here, you can roam around the event area, visit the exhibitors, bump into other participants for instant videoconferencing with up to four people, watch the livestreams, and explore to your heart's content. You might even find some special surprises!</p>
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+<p>If you want to meet your friends in LibreAdventure, you can use \#libreplanet_room_hallway in IRC to coordinate with other visitors.</p>
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