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-<div class="abstract"><div class="webform-html-textarea"><p>This presentation will show off how I (a non-programmer) introduced my young son to computers and software freedom with a plain old command-line stuff programming basics instead of internet and fancy video games. He loved it, and I hope you will too. `cowsay -e LL just say no to proprietary software`</p>
+<div class="abstract"><div class="webform-html-textarea"><p>This presentation will show off how I (a non-programmer) introduced my young son to computers and software freedom with plain old command-line stuff and programming basics, instead of Internet and fancy video games. He loved it, and I hope you will too. `cowsay -e LL just say no to proprietary software`</p>
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