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                                                <h3><em>Step 3.a</em> Send Edward your public key</h3>
                                                <p>This is a special step that you won't have to do when corresponding with real people. In your email program's menu, go to Enigmail &rarr; Key Management. You should see your key in the list that pops up. Right click on your key and select Send Public Keys by Email. This will create a new draft message, as if you had just hit the Write button.</p>
 
-<p>Address the message to edward-en@fsf.org. Put at least one word (whatever you want) in the subject and body of the email. then hit send.</p>
+<p>Address the message to edward-en@fsf.org. Put at least one word (whatever you want) in the subject and body of the email. Then hit send.</p>
 
 <p>There should be an icon of a yellow key in the bottom right of the composition window. This means that encryption is on, however, we want this first special message to Edward to be unencrypted. Click the key icon once to turn encryption off. The key should become grey, with a blue dot on it (to alert you that the setting has been changed from the default). Once encryption is off, hit Send.</p>
 
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                                                                <h4>Troubleshooting</h4>
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                                                                        <dt>Enigmail can't find Edward's key</dt>
-                                                                               <dd>Close the pop-ups that have appeared since you clicked. Make sure you are connected to the Internet and try again. If that doesn't work, repeat the process, choosing a different keyserver when it asks you to pick one.</dd>
+                                                                               <dd>Close the pop-ups that have appeared since you clicked Send. Make sure you are connected to the Internet and try again. If that doesn't work, repeat the process, choosing a different keyserver when it asks you to pick one.</dd>
                                                                <dt class="feedback">Don't see a solution to your problem?</dt>
                                                                        <dd class="feedback">Please let us know on the <a href="https://libreplanet.org/wiki/GPG_guide/Public_Review">feedback page</a>.</dd>
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                                                <h3><em>Important:</em> Security tips</h3>
                                                <p>Even if you encrypted your email, the subject line is not encrypted, so don't put private information there. The sending and receiving addresses aren't encrypted either, so they could be read by a surveillance system. When you send attachments, Enigmail will give you an option of whether you want to encrypt them.</p>
-<p>It's also good practice to click the key icon in your email composition window <strong>before</strong> you start to write. Otherwise, your email client could save an unencrypted draft on the mail server, potentially exposing it to snooping.</p>
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                                                <h3><em>Step 3.c</em> Receive a response</h3>
-                                               <p>When Edward receives your email, he will use his private key to decrypt it, then fetch your public key from a keyserver and use it to encrypt a response to you.</p>
+                                               <p>When Edward receives your email, he will use his private key to decrypt it, then use your public key (which you sent him in <a href="step-3a">Step 3.A</a> to encrypt his reply to you.</p>
                                                <p class="notes">Since you encrypted this email with Edward's public key, Edward's private key is required to decrypt it. Edward is the only one with his private key, so no one except him &mdash; not even you &mdash; can decrypt it.</p>
                                                <p class="notes">It may take two or three minutes for Edward to respond. In the meantime, you might want to skip ahead and check out the <a href="#section5">Use it Well</a> section of this guide.</p>
                                                <p>When you receive Edward's email and open it, Enigmail will automatically detect that it is encrypted with your public key, and then it will use your private key to decrypt it.</p>