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                        <h4>This year, choose freedom</h4>
                        <p>To minimize ecological waste and encourage free software adoption, we advise you to end that cycle of forced obsolescence and user exploitation, and opt to try running <a href="https://gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw">free software</a> on a device you already own. If you're unlucky enough to get a gift that doesn't respect your freedom, you can still <a href="https://h-node.org">help others avoid it</a> by documenting its ethical pitfalls.</p>
 <p>Let your loved ones know that you respect their freedom and privacy
-too much to cave for the newest Apple, Amazon, or Google device, and
-give them the one gift that keeps on giving: freedom.</p>
+too much to cave for the newest Apple, Amazon, Google or another device laden with proprietary software. Give them the one gift that keeps on giving: freedom.</p>
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