Improving the feel of the Edward down message and propagating it to other operating...
authorZak Rogoff <zak@montage.office.fsf.org>
Wed, 8 Jul 2015 21:38:30 +0000 (17:38 -0400)
committerZak Rogoff <zak@montage.office.fsf.org>
Wed, 8 Jul 2015 21:38:30 +0000 (17:38 -0400)
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                                                <h2><em>#3</em> Try it out!</h2>
-                                               <p>Now you'll try a test correspondence with a computer program named Edward, which knows how to use encryption. Except where noted, these are the same steps you'd follow when corresponding with a real, live person. <em>Note: Edward is currently having some technical difficulties, so he may take a long time to respond, or not respond at all. We're sorry about this and we're working hard to fix it. Your key will still work even without testing with Edward.</em></p>
+                                               <p>Now you'll try a test correspondence with a computer program named Edward, which knows how to use encryption. Except where noted, these are the same steps you'd follow when corresponding with a real, live person.</p>
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+                                               <p><em>Oops! Edward is currently having some technical difficulties, so he may take a long time to respond, or not respond at all. We're sorry about this and we're working hard to fix it. Your key will still work even without testing with Edward.</em></p>
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                                                <h2><em>#3</em> Try it out!</h2>
                                                <p>Now you'll try a test correspondence with a computer program named Edward, which knows how to use encryption. Except where noted, these are the same steps you'd follow when corresponding with a real, live person.</p>
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+                                               <p><em>Oops! Edward is currently having some technical difficulties, so he may take a long time to respond, or not respond at all. We're sorry about this and we're working hard to fix it. Your key will still work even without testing with Edward.</em></p>
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                                                <h2><em>#3</em> Try it out!</h2>
                                                <p>Now you'll try a test correspondence with a computer program named Edward, which knows how to use encryption. Except where noted, these are the same steps you'd follow when corresponding with a real, live person.</p>
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+                                               <p><em>Oops! Edward is currently having some technical difficulties, so he may take a long time to respond, or not respond at all. We're sorry about this and we're working hard to fix it. Your key will still work even without testing with Edward.</em></p>
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