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 <h2 id="office">Friday night "open" office</h2>
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-<p>On Friday night, the LibrePlanet festitivies start early at the <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/contact/visiting-the-free-software-foundation">Free Software Foundation office</a>. Join us for socializing and snacks, but arrive early! We have a small office, so for everyone's safety, we're capping the attendance at 50. FSF staffers will be letting more people in as others leave, so you may have to wait at the door.</p>
+<p>On Friday night, the LibrePlanet festitivies start early at the <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/contact/visiting-the-free-software-foundation">Free Software Foundation office</a>. Join us for socializing and snacks, but arrive early! We have a small office, so for everyone's safety, we're capping the attendance at fifty. FSF staffers will be letting more people in as others leave, so you may have to wait at the door.</p>
+<p>You'll be able to pick up your conference badge (and
+purchase raffle tickets), allowing you to skip the line on Saturday
+morning! The FSF office is a short walk from the Downtown Crossing,
+State, and Park Street MBTA stops. The FSF office is an accessible
+  space, and is at 51 Franklin Street, 5th Floor, Boston, MA 02110.</p>
 <ul>
 <li><strong>Time:</strong> 18:00 - 20:00, Friday 3/17</li>
 <li><strong>Location:</strong> <a href="https://www.fsf.org/about/contact/">FSF office</a></li>
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 <h2 id="walk">Freedom Trail walk</h2>
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-<p>On Saturday evening, starting at 18:35, join us for a walking tour of historic Boston (7.5 kilometers or 4.5 miles (about 100 minutes)). It's an opportunity for you to get some fresh air and exercise, see a bit of Boston, and, if you want, interact with other conference goers in a relaxed environment. We'll be going past the first fourteen of the landmarks of the Freedom Trail. An RSVP to <a href="mailto:info@fsf.org">info@fsf.org</a>, while not required, is greatly appreciated; it will help us gauge interest</p>
+<p>On Saturday evening, starting at 18:35, join us for a walking tour of historic Boston (7.5 kilometers or 4.5 miles (about 100 minutes)). It's an opportunity for you to get some fresh air and exercise, see a bit of Boston, and, if you want, interact with other conference goers in a relaxed environment. We'll be going past the first fourteen of the landmarks of the Freedom Trail. An RSVP to <a href="mailto:info@fsf.org">info@fsf.org</a>, while not required, is greatly appreciated; it will help us gauge interest.</p>
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 <li><strong>Time:</strong> 18:35 - ~20:15, Saturday 3/18</li>
 <li><strong>Location:</strong> BCEC and beyond