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                          LibrePlanet is an annual conference of the global free software community. Join software developers, policy experts, activists and computer users to learn skills, share accomplishments and face challenges. Newcomers are always welcome.</p>
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-2014's theme is Grass <code>root</code>. The free software movement has always been driven by a broad base of people. Each individual provides her own small piece of the puzzle, whether it's contributing code to a free software project, helping people in her community switch to free software, running a local user group, or challenging companies who stand in the way of software freedom. All of these grassroots actions grow together form a movement that is getting stronger every day.
+2014's theme is Grass <code>root</code>. The free software movement has always been driven by a broad and interconnected network of people, each with root access to her own small piece of the puzzle. Whether it's contributing code to a free software project, helping her community switch to free software, organizing a local user group, or challenging companies who stand in the way of software freedom, these grassroots actions combine to form a movement that is getting stronger every day.
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